A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.
Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:破折号之前的主语是Cane这本书,后面平行的也需要对应是书而不是人,而本选项中破折号身后都是人;Black Americans和a Black American均是正确的。
B选项:介词including需改为the others being。include是“包括”的意思,当我们用它的时候,可能表示全部子集或者部分子集,例如:
Cars include Benz, BMW, and Audi.
这个例句中,显然小汽车的品牌不止BBA这三种。在本题中,显然三个最好的小说已经全了,即,Native Son和Invisible Man是剩余的全部了(前面已经说了Cane了),所以应该用更准确的the other being。
C选项:破折号后面的平行错误同(A);介词including措辞错误同选项(B)。
D选项:破折号后面的平行错误同(A)。
E选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
2.idiom,including不能写出全集,前面已经有一部了,加上后面两部就全了,BC错
3.平行,前面是Jean Toomer's Cane,所有格形式,后面也应该用所有格才最好,B错
4.a black American可能更好,但是americans也不算错。
破折号的作用是对前面的内容进行补充或者说明,后面接状语是完全OK的,
这里的others being是典型的独立主格结构,说明其他的是哪些作品。
B,介词including需改为the others being。include是“包括”的意思,当我们用它的时候,可能表示全部子集或者部分子集,例如:
Cars include Benz, BMW, and Audi.
这个例句中,显然小汽车的品牌不止BBA这三种。在本题中,显然三个最好的小说已经全了,即,Native Son和Invisible Man是剩余的全部了(前面已经说了Cane了),所以应该用更准确的the other being。
C,同A
D,同A
E correct
《让·图默的手杖》作为诗歌和短篇小说的结合体,被称为美国黑人写过的三部最好的【小说】之一——另外两个是【理查德·赖特的《土生土长的儿子》】和【拉尔夫·埃里森的《隐形人》】
the others being:C是最好的BA作品之一,剩下两本最好的作品是XX
including:C是最好的BA作品之一,包括……
句意上来讲也已经很一目了然了
2.Ron: "including" specifically implies that the following enumeration is NOT exhaustive. Including不是穷尽枚举
题意不是三个非裔美国人,而是三本非裔美国人写的书,故后面一定是书,只有E是正确的
1) 实质平行: dash应该是书,排除ACD
2) 形式平行: dash前是 [author]'s [books], dash后用[author]'s [books]的形式优于[books] by [author].
#the three best novels ever written by a Black American是可接受的,也更清楚每个书有一个作者。类似用法,birds have a four-chambered heart.
Cars include Benz, BMW, and Audi.
这个例句中,显然小汽车的品牌不止BBA这三种。在本题中,显然三个最好的小说已经全了,即,Native Son和Invisible Man是剩余的全部了(前面已经说了Cane了),所以应该用更准确的the other being。
2. this problem can be solved entirely with basic parallelism: there's only one choice in which all three works appear as "[author]'s [book]".
thus, this (somewhat weird) use of 'being' is just here as a distraction.
include是“包括”的意思,当我们用它的时候,可能表示全部子集或者部分子集,例如:
Cars include Benz, BMW, and Audi.
这个例句中,显然小汽车的品牌不止BBA这三种。在本题中,显然三个最好的小说已经全了,即,Native Son和Invisible Man是剩余的全部了(前面已经说了Cane了),所以应该用更准确的the other being