Unlike Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated the music of the postwar period, Bartók founded no school and left behind only a handful of disciples.
Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated
Schoenberg and his twelve-tone system which dominated
Schoenberg, whose twelve-tone system dominated
the twelve-tone system of Schoenberg that has dominated
Schoenberg and the twelve-tone system, dominating
1.比较对象,unlike的比较对象应该对应,Bartók是个人,前面应该也是人才对,ABDE都错,复合主语也不对。
2.idiom,which前面应该加逗号才对,B错
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