In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now
The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:通常,代词的指代对象应是名词词组的核心词。因此,本选项中it的指代对象为weight of the discus,这在逻辑上是有问题的。真正在周边放上铅的应该是discus,而不是discus的重量;另外,is concentrated应改为was concentrated,划线部分给出了明显的过去时间in a previous design。
B选项:介词according to措辞有误,according to的意思是“根据”,我们不能说,“根据过去的设计,质量怎么怎么安放”,而应该说,“在过去的设计中,质量是怎么怎么安放的”。
C选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center是伴随状语,其主语为the discus。
D选项:全句缺少谓语动词。
E选项:并列连词and身后缺少谓语动词。
A. it指代the weight of the discus,但是lined with lead应该是discus
B. 同A
C. right
D. but后面句子不完整,跟前面成分平行后依旧不完整
E. and后面句子不完整,与前面成分无法构成平行
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