In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now
The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:通常,代词的指代对象应是名词词组的核心词。因此,本选项中it的指代对象为weight of the discus,这在逻辑上是有问题的。真正在周边放上铅的应该是discus,而不是discus的重量;另外,is concentrated应改为was concentrated,划线部分给出了明显的过去时间in a previous design。
B选项:介词according to措辞有误,according to的意思是“根据”,我们不能说,“根据过去的设计,质量怎么怎么安放”,而应该说,“在过去的设计中,质量是怎么怎么安放的”。
C选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center是伴随状语,其主语为the discus。
D选项:全句缺少谓语动词。
E选项:并列连词and身后缺少谓语动词。
Once designed with 【its】 weight concentrated in a metal center, the 【discus】 used in track competition is now lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
用于田径比赛的铁饼 曾经被设计为将重量集中在金属中心处,现在是将其放在边缘,从而提高了飞行的稳定性并导致更长的投掷。
(C) (√); Designed引导的过去分词结构作定语修饰句子主语 the discus,逻辑正确。
Once designed with…, the discus … is … now lined with…, thereby improving…
原先的设计是将重心放在金属中心处, 而现在是将其放在边缘…
生词:
discus n.(铁饼) 不误认做discuss
Perimeter n. 周边,边缘
考点:
1. 指代一致
2. line: vt. to cover the inner surface of
选项分析:
(A) it指代weight of the discus错误;划线部分is concentrated应该使用过去时态。
(B) it指代问题,同A; According to改变了原文的逻辑意思,原文不是想说根据,只是陈述客观事实。
(D) 全句缺少谓语动词。
(E) design固定搭配,没有design doing的结构; having concentrated 完成时使用没必要; 后半句没有谓语动词, and now 应该为and now is 时态改变,因此不能直接并列,前半句使用的是过去时态was.
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