Since 1975 so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it.
so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it
many people have been moving to Utah, so Mormons once 75 percent of the population are now accounting for only half
that many people have been moving to Utah, such that the Mormons that were once 75 percent of the population are now accounting for only half of it
many people have been moving to Utah such that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now only account for half
so many people have been moving to Utah that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now account for only half
A.such that连用是很奇怪的用法...只有在一些数学题中偶尔会出现:e.g., "choose x and y such that x + y = 10" 以及 用现在进行时 are accounting for 完全没有必要尤其是和其它选项中的一般现在时去比
B.once 75 percent of the population=》作为同位语出现最好两边都有逗号这样可以更加清晰的表达含义
C.整个句子都没有主语
D.ONLY是去强调half的,最好和half紧挨着比较好(尤其是与E中only的位置比较)
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