Soaring television costs accounted for more than half the spending in the presidential campaign of 1992, a greater proportion than it was in any previous election.
a greater proportion than it was
a greater proportion than
a greater proportion than they have been
which is greater than was so
which is greater than it has been
1.which修饰对象错误,DE错
2.代词指代,it和they的指代都不明确,而且不正确。
这里是比较和省略结合,把比较的名词省略掉。
a greater proportion than(the proportion)(television costs had accounted for of the spending)in any previous election
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