Unlike most other mergers in the utility industry, which have been driven by the need to save money and extend companies' service areas, the merger of the nation's leading gas and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening their utility markets to competition.
and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening
and electric companies are intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open
and electric companies are intended to create a huge network that will be marketing the utilities in question, with states opening
company and electric company are intending to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question, with states opening
company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open
* "with states opening..." is incorrect. when you have an -ING WITHOUT COMMA modifier, like this one, it's a RESTRICTIVE ("essential") modifier. this means that we're only talking about those states that are "opening their utility markets to competition", the implication being that only some states are doing so. the intended meaning is better conveyed by "as states open..."
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