In July 1965 Mariner IV passed by Mars and took the first-ever close-up photographs of another planet, which showed that the Martian surface was like that of the Moon's in that it was pockmarked by moonlike craters and was dry and apparently dead.
which showed that the Martian surface was like that of the Moon's in that it was pockmarked by moonlike craters and was dry and apparently dead
which showed a dry, apparently dead Martian surface, and it was pockmarked by craters like the Moon has
which showed the Martian surface as a dry, apparently dead one, which was pockmarked with craters such as the Moon's
photos showing the Martian surface to be that of the Moon's, dry and apparently dead, and it was pockmarked by moonlike craters
photos that showed a dry, apparently dead Martian surface pockmarked with craters like those on the Moon
题目分析:
略
选项分析:
A选项:本选项是非限定性定语从句。由于定语和状语均具有就近修饰原则,所以该定语从句修饰名词another planet。但在逻辑上,展现了月球的情况的应该是“照片”,而不是“另一个行星”。
B选项:定语从句错误同(A);like是介词而不是连词,身后不能直接添加句子。
C选项:定语从句错误同(A);such as措辞有误,火星和月亮应该是类比关系,而不是举例关系。
D选项:不定式短语the Martian surface to be that of the Moon's, dry and apparently dead需改为从句或名词短语,例如a dry, apparently dead Martian surface。这点考查了不定式和名词的区别。用之于本题,由于变化成分是show的宾语部分,因此应该由show的约束力判断。显然地,show的约束力较弱,应该用名词或从句作宾语。
E选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
A. a NOUN of WHO‘ s,这里的第二个名词应该是人,而不是物,表示所属。
B: like后面不能跟句子。
C: such as用法错误,此处不是举例,要用like。
D: ..., and it was pockmarked by moonlike craters,and后面的内容与passed, took并列,it变成了Mariner IV,语义错误。
如果在语义上没有明显歧义,请不要把跳跃修饰作为排除理由!!只要有符合逻辑的修饰对象,原则上都可以。
在这题里面:
it's obvious that "photographs" is the intended meaning. So, no problem.
If there were a genuine ambiguity here, then you'd have a point.
E.g.,
A close friend of Mr. Smith, who was seen walking in downtown Gainesville, ...
Here, it's genuinely impossible to tell whether the person walking in downtown Gainesville was Mr. Smith or his friend. So here you've got a problem. But, if the meaning is obvious, "ambiguity" is not an issue.
like后面不可以加句子
such as 不能表示比较,such as 和like在gm里比较严格: like表示比较, such as 表示举例
photos 可以做同位语成分: photographs of XXX, photos…… 同位语,和前面的名词可以重复,表示强调
show不能加宾补,
A错在in that。Ron神说过,句子 A is like B in that C,它的隐含意思是只在C这个方面A像B,也就是说除了C以外,A和B都是不像的。而我们知道火星和月球表面肯定还有很多其他的相似点。
同意跳跃修饰。A还有个that of the Moon's所有格错误登录 或 注册 后可以参加讨论
并列 it was....作为一个整句和前面的passed and took 并列
B like是介词而不是连词,身后不能直接添加句子
C the Moons' 类比有误;such as 使用错误,此处不该是举例
D photos showing the Martian surface of .. 只展示了surface这一件事;photos that show .. 符合语义
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跳跃修饰:往往因为倒装(an evidence was obtained in 1920s that..)或者结构所迫出现。ABC错误不在which,在它处。
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另外,that of the Moon's是否也有误呢?应该变成that of the Moon?或者moon's?
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