考比较的平行:
women who ate were ……than women/those who ate were完美的平行。women eating were than women/those eating were才是完美的平行
前后时态一样,去掉不引起歧义,后面的were可以加可以不加,但因为两个比较内容太长隔得太远,为便于理解,were最好带上。
Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately 这是一个倒装句子,但是inactivity 和making 是不能并列的,因为action noun 和simple gerund不能并列。另外lately必然修饰Making things even more difficult,不能修饰inactivity这个名词。
进行时用的不对,没有标志