例题1的状语从句还原的话，不是“while increasing demand rob the oysters there of their flavors and make them smaller, the increasing demand could alter the saline content of A Bay”吗，那原句也是怪怪的？还是还原得有错？
考比较的平行：
women who ate were ……than women/those who ate were完美的平行。women eating were than women/those eating were才是完美的平行
前后时态一样，去掉不引起歧义，后面的were可以加可以不加，但因为两个比较内容太长隔得太远，为便于理解，were最好带上。
Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately 这是一个倒装句子，但是inactivity 和making 是不能并列的，因为action noun 和simple gerund不能并列。另外lately必然修饰Making things even more difficult，不能修饰inactivity这个名词。
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例题1的状语从句还原的话，不是“while increasing demand rob the oysters there of their flavors and make them smaller, the increasing demand could alter the saline content of A Bay”吗，那原句也是怪怪的？还是还原得有错？
还原的有一丢丢问题~rob和make逻辑上应该是alter saline的结果；而while表转折或者同时发生