Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.
that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have
that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has
that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has
having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have
having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have
having done可以用非限定,一般用于S, having done, VO结构没有歧义,这时候having done修饰S主语,而不是后面的动作。
Having done用于限定定语通常产生错误:
1、时态问题,done就done了,是一个已经完成的statement,不应该用having的进行完成时来表示状态,正在完成中是很奇怪的状态
2、简洁性:having done都可以用who has/have done来代替,所以having done不是一个好的结构
1.主谓一致,BC错
2.butchered应该是被动,DE错
3.句子结构,BE没有谓语,BE错
4.that修饰的应该是a whale,这里用was没有错
having been的用法错误。DE错
B. has与主语Fossils不一致;then与subsequently重复。
C. has与主语Fossils不一致;which非限定性修饰whale错误,应该用非限定性修饰。
D. having been beached,现在分词的完成式having done(主动)不做限定性修饰,只能做非限定性修饰。
E. having beached,现在分词的完成式having been done(被动)不做限定性修饰;then与subsequently重复。
排除法:Fossile 是主语,因此位于用have。排除B,C
既然主谓不缺,中间就为修饰或从句。考虑选项有beached 和 butchered两个谓语。因此选从句。排除D,E。只剩A
考点:时态+修饰(定语)
1、主语是fossils,所以谓语动词复数,排除B/C
2、现在分词作后置定语修饰,描述的是一个持续的客观事实,而原文的动作不是一个一直持续的动作,所以D/E错。
另外,having done的形式不能作定语,只有doing才能作定语。所以答案选A
B/C错在has应该是复数have,D/E错在having beached的完成时态,多少年前是一个时间点,不是时间段,不能用完成时。ing本身没用错,ing是可以做noun modifier的,如a cat sleeping on the couch is mine。comma-ing则只能做状语,不能做非限制性定语用。
A选项:
a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago是分词作定语,通常过去分词是表示被动,同时不需要带be动词就可以做modifier了。这里的beach是主动发生,应该用beaching。但这里还需要考虑一个时态问题,动词分词作modifier时,表示与主句一样的时态,但这里主句的时态时have been recovered,表现在,beach发生在过去,所以不能用动词分词,改成动词自己的时态(过去式beached)
and a whale that was subsequently butchered by hominids 是定语从句修饰名词,that在从句充当了成分。
beach原来是主动的。。。
subsequently和then重复,谓语动词应为复数
Fossils of a whale
(that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids)
have been recovered by paleontologists.
主谓单复数不一致->B/C
that 限制性modify 可以修饰fossil/whale ‘beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids’意思上应该是modify whale
having beached 逻辑主语 fossil 状语修饰主句verb fossils have been recovered by paleontologists 显然doesn't make sense
D: a whale 'beached' on a shore. Do NOT use passive voice.
现在分词的完成时 having been done不能做限制性修饰,只能作为非限制性修饰