Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.
Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio
Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river
Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it
In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio
No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river
宾补是主语给宾语添加的新的属性:have a river as the focal point
B,Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district.而后面is the city's most popular attraction的主语已经变成了the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio,不再是the river的性质。不再是市中心和穿过商业中心这两个性质unlike不起来,B错误!
E,倒装
No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life,
=Many cities in the United States no longer have a river as the focal point of urban life,
A:unlike的对比错误,把the river和cities进行比较了。
(存疑))B:unlike对比,与 the river in many cities in the United States相对应,the river in San Antonio 更好。which错误修饰the United States。
C:unlike的对比错误
D;不存在对比
D:几乎没有美国城市把河流作为生活重点,但是SA的河流是生活重点。
E:很多城市不再把河流当做重点,但是SA的河流仍然是生活重点。 强调 这个 “no longer”,不再是……仍然是……
like比较结构一定要完全对称
考点 逻辑语义 比较
like比较,主句要立马给出比较对象;
A many United States cities和the river不可比
B 主句没有立马给出比较对象
C the river和 San Antonio不可比
D in San Antonio放在the river后面,意思是Antinio的河,和the River Walk是两条河,语义不合理
E 正确
d选项表达的意思是在美国几乎没有城市里河流时城市生活的关注点。而其他的选项里表达的意思是在美国绝大多数的城市里,河流不再!!!是生活的关注点。前者的表达了一种不变的状态,而后者表达了一种变化。
这几个叹号直接打醒我了,就是说d的表达在文法上没错,但是和原句表达的侧重点上不一样。
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D选项,看了那么多就是仍然没看懂,只是觉得如果few 表示否定,能够解释D,在不多的美国城市里,一条河是重要景点。 but很奇怪,根本没有转折,只像解释了在FEW范围里的其中之一。
choice d:
drastic change in meaning
this sentence has completely gotten rid of any reference to the concept of 'no longer'. while all the other sentences say that things have changed, this sentence presents the situation as if it's always been that way.
(B) which指代United States错误,应该指代river。
CD 讨论关于D,E 选项:http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-909138-1-1.html
所以其实语法没有错误,是逻辑错误喽。
更正,所以D项其实语法没有错误,是逻辑错误喽。
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