Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native Denmark.
Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained
Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain
Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained
Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
autobiographies, which remained。。。这里的which修饰有争议,不够清楚
"even as" is a transition used to imply simultaneity, and is usually used with parallel tenses (i.e., same tense in both parts of the parallel structure). 主句从句的时态要保持一致
here's an example: even as his income has increased, joe has continued to feel less and less satisfied with his life
as表示当/像/因为 在B中都说不通。
e:时态对应错误,are among....remain...而不是wrote...remain
even as" is a transition used to imply simultaneity, and is usually used with parallel tenses (i.e., same tense in both parts of the parallel structure).
even as 没有转折的意思,同时as well as several autobiographies是插入语,所以将主语和谓语用逗号隔开了,所以选择E.
A 中如果转折要成立,则两个which时态应该一致,而且用非限定性从句,使句子主干变成hc写童话,与此同时也写小说诗歌。。。。。。可能这两件事本身没有对比性吧~~
C even as 没有转折的意思,表示“正巧在。。。时候”
even as无转折含义!!!
even as没有转折含义,表示同时发生,两部分应该用同一时态
本来想选E,但是很纠结,觉得原文用while,并不是是那么明显的转折/让步关系...T T
但是仔细看A,觉得A的问题更大,which的修饰一直都是一个很容易引起歧义的地方,A中的which仿佛只修饰了autobiographies
"even as" is a transition used to imply simultaneity, and is usually used with parallel tenses (i.e., same tense in both parts of the parallel structure).
A:第二个which指代错误,不能指代前面一整串的名词,而只能指代一个。
选项A:
which remained就近修饰名词,但无法修饰一组名词。
时态值得商榷。
Even as即at the same time,没有转折的意思。
可直接排除B,C,D
A:第二个which指代错误,不能指代前面一整串的名词,而只能指代一个。
审题时一定要从大局观去分析句子每个部分的作用,以及他们相互是怎样联系的。
* first, the tenses should be parallel, since the descriptions are meant to be simultaneous.
* second, they should be the present tense, since the sentence is stating facts that are statistical truths.
补充
1.fairy tales后用that限定性定从更好
2.最……之一 用among the most 不用some of the most
3.区分 although,even as(at the same time),while
even as没有转折的含义
A。have been 现在完成时 表示过去到现在,未来怎么样不一定,没有直接用一般现在时表示持续性的状态好
which remained 一般过去时只表示过去在丹麦以外的地方没有名,现在怎么样不知道,应该用一般现在时
且which修饰前面一堆名词还是紧挨的autobiography 不清晰。
while转折前后是:他写了童话,while他写了小说等,转折关系不强烈,没有although好
B。which从句主谓宾完整,which不作任何成分,错
C。even as 正当...时 表同时发生 前后时态都不一致,且意思和still有点重复
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