Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
One out of every eight workers were employed in automobile-related jobs in the 1920's, with the American economy being dominated by the automobile industry.
The automobile industry dominated the American economy in the 1920's, with one of every eight workers having been employed in automobile-related jobs.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry had dominated the American economy, when one out of every eight workers was employed in an automobile-related job.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry dominated the American economy, with one out of every eight workers employed in an automobile-related job.
C选项,独立主格结构也可以放在主句的后面,表示伴随的状态或结果。
dominated the American economy in the 1920's是one of every eight workers为 xx industry工作的结果,所以不应放在主句里,反而应该成为独立主格
A选项的核心词有问题
idiom: one out of every number:每······→排除A(job 不能用employing修饰)和C
这里有几个原则需要补充
①时间状语的位置,不是考点,不需要考虑,
②句子强调重心的变化需要注意,如B:改变了原句的句子强调重心,没必要
D和E:这里需要考虑的是tense
in the 1920‘s→意味着使用过去式,而非过去完成式,排除
When 引导的独立主格结构。
In the 1920's, the automobile industry dominated the American economy, with one out of every eight workers employed in an automobile-related job.这里employed不会出现修饰不清吗?到底是修饰eight workers 还是 one?到底是八个人中有一人是被汽车相关的工作雇佣还是八个被汽车相关的工作雇佣的人中的一个??
忘了employed in an automobile-related job可以跳跃修饰
(A) employing的逻辑主语是jobs,不符合逻辑,应该是industry;时间状语in the 1920’s的位置不正确,存在歧义,可能是jobs in the 1920’s,也可能是in the 1920’s employing…。
(B) with the American economy being dominated的表达方式不如直接用动词形式更简洁有效,而且被动语态的表达方式也不够清楚;原句的主谓语the automobile industry dominated…变成了修饰成分,改变了原句强调重心。
(C) 时间状语in the 1920’s的位置不正确,应该置于句首修饰整个句子;one of every eight workers与原句要表达的one out of every eight workers不同,前者是“八人中的一人”,而后者是“每八人中就有一人”;with… having been…的表达方式不清楚。
(D) in the 1920’s是过去的时间,应该用过去时态,而不是过去完成时态;由when引导时间状语从句,改变了原句所要表达的意思。
我认为C和E的区别在于:这道题表达的是 automobile industry引领经济的一个人表现是-- 每八个人里有一个人从事相关工作。这是一个状态。而C中having been 表示employment发生在industry dominated economy之前,不能论证现在这个时候是引领经济的? E表达更优。
C选项是错在automobile-related jobs的复数么
C选项中的 having been employed 时态是否有问题??如果 E 也改成 having been employed ,还是正确的吗?
个人觉得独立主格不存在时态问题了,have done直接排除
C选项,独立主格结构也可以放在主句的后面,表示伴随的状态或结果。
dominated the American economy in the 1920's是one of every eight workers为 xx industry工作的结果,所以不应放在主句里,反而应该成为独立主格
A选项的核心词有问题
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