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Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
题目分析：
本题难度主要在于词汇难以理解。从考点来说，由于句首出现了一个介词unlike，我们很容易明白这个题考的是“比较”。
选项分析：
A选项：本选项有两处错误。第一，with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area是一个独立主格结构，我们应该将其改为一个非限制性定语从句。这是因为，独立主格结构和其主句之间没有语法关系，也就是说，我们无从得知immobilize这件事是否讲的是the body's inflammatory response。相反地，如果是用in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area，那么先行词the body's inflammatory response可以在该从句中充当状语，即，widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area in the body's inflammatory response。第二，本选项中的主句是一个合句，并列的两句话为：the body's response to sunburn is more localized和the body's response to sunburn is resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin。但是显然地，这两句话并不具有并列关系，即，“身体对太阳灼烧的反应更加区域化”和“身体对太阳灼烧的反应导致一些什么特点”之间不具备并列关系。
B选项：unlike连接两者不可比。应该比较的是身体的两个反应，而不是身体反应和sunburn。
C选项：独立主格错误同选项(A)；比较错误同选项(B)。
D选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
E选项：句首出现的unlike已经表示两者的比较了，不需要在主句前再加instead了，即，instead是赘余的。
根据句首的Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains必须修饰主句的主语，选项剩下ADE
choice a, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals，是独立主格需要修饰主句，但它和the body's response to sunburn is more localized并没有逻辑关系。
choice e, instead是赘余的，并且in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing，其中healing的主语变成了 widespread swelling and stiffness，但从逻辑上heal的主语应该是injured area
感觉E选项的healing的主语不明确
，with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area是一个独立主格结构 ，with独立主格结构
关于E选项为什么错
①it's wrong, because "until healing" would apply to the subject "swelling and stiffness". those don't heal; the injured area does.
②instead出现很多余 因为unlike就表示的这个意思
平行结构，instead多余
独立主格结构和其主句之间没有语法关系，也就是说，我们无从得知immobilize这件事是否讲的是the body's inflammatory response。相反地，如果是用in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area，那么先行词the body's inflammatory response可以在该从句中充当状语，即，widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area in the body's inflammatory response。
until和as一样 要么做介词要么做连词
介词后面加名词 比如 until 1994
连词后面加句子 until it has healed
until不能加doing 表示省略 while可以
E中instead 是赘余的
until 连词 句子
until 介词 具体时间
注意体会
it has healed it指的是伤口 这个完成时表示的heal这个过程
关于E选项为什么错
①it's wrong, because "until healing" would apply to the subject "swelling and stiffness". those don't heal; the injured area does.
②instead出现很多余 因为unlike就表示的这个意思
独立主格结构和其主句之间没有语法关系，也就是说，我们无从得知immobilize这件事是否讲的是the body's inflammatory response。相反地，如果是用in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area，那么先行词the body's inflammatory response可以在该从句中充当状语，即，widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area in the body's inflammatory response。
做题时根本就没看到instead这个词……
注意：有的时候读题目的时候不要跳读，比如选项E中有instead，出现这样的词非常重要。特别是参考逻辑，阅读的解题，这些词通常是显示了新的逻辑关系的。所以不能妄加新的逻辑关系。
until 连词 句子
until 介词 具体时间
所以until it has healed 和 until healing都可以？
is more localized and resulting in a distinct line 不平行
it 指代the injured area
Until 后面到底改用heals, has healed, or healing呢
以及heal的逻辑主语