Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.
In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
AB中added的逻辑主语错误,直接排除
C没有语法错误,但C的语义有问题。人们现在seek的 expanded benefits和the increase in hourly wages并没有added to的黏着关系,而in addition to表示的是一个除此之外的关系,并不是附着关系,added to错误
D有语法错误,按照正确的逻辑,that指代的应该是increase,所以这里应该用was;或者可以理解为:这里用了were,所以that指代的就不是increase么认识wages,这与语义相悖了...
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