Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.
In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
1、the increase in hourly wages that were requested中的that代指increase,是单数应该用was requested
2、are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to…不合理,因为added to the increase in hourly wages,前面更合理的应该为seeking to have an expanded program of retirement, an expanded program of retirement 被added to the increase in hourly wages意义上更合理
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