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Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
题目分析：
本题难度主要在于词汇难以理解。从考点来说，由于句首出现了一个介词unlike，我们很容易明白这个题考的是“比较”。
选项分析：
A选项：本选项有两处错误。第一，with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area是一个独立主格结构，我们应该将其改为一个非限制性定语从句。这是因为，独立主格结构和其主句之间没有语法关系，也就是说，我们无从得知immobilize这件事是否讲的是the body's inflammatory response。相反地，如果是用in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area，那么先行词the body's inflammatory response可以在该从句中充当状语，即，widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area in the body's inflammatory response。第二，本选项中的主句是一个合句，并列的两句话为：the body's response to sunburn is more localized和the body's response to sunburn is resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin。但是显然地，这两句话并不具有并列关系，即，“身体对太阳灼烧的反应更加区域化”和“身体对太阳灼烧的反应导致一些什么特点”之间不具备并列关系。
B选项：unlike连接两者不可比。应该比较的是身体的两个反应，而不是身体反应和sunburn。
C选项：独立主格错误同选项(A)；比较错误同选项(B)。
D选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
E选项：句首出现的unlike已经表示两者的比较了，不需要在主句前再加instead了，即，instead是赘余的。
感觉解释有些问题，补充一下Ron大神的吧
关于A 错主要错在parallel：
the most black-and-white error in (a) -- and the one you should be most on top of, given the importance of the topic -- is its lack of parallelism.
"... and resulting" isn't parallel to anything, so that choice is wrong.
*with用法无错，但句意有错， eg"UNTIL an injury HEALS"无意义
（remember—you should not even look at the answer choices until you understand EXACTLY what the sentence is supposed to mean, and EXACTLY what each word/phrase/group of words is supposed to DO.）
关于D 的in which：
To date, GMAC has only used "which" to modify two kinds of things:
"- Noun
"- Noun + prep + other noun
"... , in which..." (like "... , which...") can modify (i) a noun, or (ii) a noun1 + (preposition + noun2), where the stuff in parentheses modifies noun1.
this is also "noun1 + (preposition + noun2)", with noun2 = "cuts and sprains".
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