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In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world's leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.
with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going
with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes
with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going
selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes
selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going
题目分析：
略。
选项分析：
选项A：with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets是独立主格。我们知道，过去分词短语表达被动语态，其表明的是“有九千多吨一年被卖到了国外的市场上”，这句话没有指明是“谁”在把这九千吨东西卖到国际市场中。在逻辑上，由于主句说过了“阿根廷变成了世界上最大的出口商”，所以必须保证sold的主语是阿根廷。
选项B：独立主格错误同(A)；另外，并列连词and应连接两个完整句子（有时因为省略的现象而看起来像是连接两个词，参考功能平行），本选项中and身后缺少谓语动词。
选项C：独立主格错误同(A)；
选项D：本选项的错误在于并列连词and。其连接的两个句子为：“阿根廷变成了世界上第一的蜂蜜出口商”和“一半的蜂蜜出口到了美国”。这两句话在实质上不具有并列关系。在逻辑上，almost half of it goes to the United States应该是selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets的修饰或进一步解释，而selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets是主句Argentina has become the world's leading exporter of honey的修饰。
选项E：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
A.which指代markets，市场不能go to US,且定语从句没有谓语动词；
B.and half of it that goes句子结构错误，且原意应该是修饰成分，但这里变成主干成分；
C.with…,with两个伴随状语会产生修饰歧义；
D.and half of it goes to US将修饰成分变成主干错误，且语义不合理；
E.正确
老师choice b, with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets是逗号隔开的介词宾语结构作为状语，不是独立主格结构
choice a, almost half of which going整个定语从句缺少谓语动词
choice c, with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets是逗号隔开的介词宾语结构作为状语，句末独立主格with almost half of it going to US只能跳过状语去修饰主句Argentina has become the world's leading exporter of honey,但从语意上说“一半的销量去了美国”能够修饰的对象应该是“一年销往海外市场的出口量在9000桶”
介短作状语应该也是没有逻辑主语的
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B的and almost half of it, 如果跟Sale并列，那意思就不对了。应该是half of it是Sale的一部分，不能跟sale 并列。。
A. almost half of which后面应该接动词
B. that多余
C. 两个with作状语，错误
with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets意思为“有九千多吨一年被卖到了国外的市场上”，这句话没有指明是“谁”在把这九千吨东西卖到国际市场中。在逻辑上，由于主句说过了“阿根廷变成了世界上最大的出口商”，所以必须保证sold的主语是阿根廷。
D. it指代不明，按照语意应该是90000tons，反而应该是复数，更加错误
However in option E, the prepositional phrase "with almost half going.." refers in turn to the present participle modifier "selling..." - such usage is generally considered awkward in GMAT. A better, more GMAT-like construction would be:
In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, selling to foreign markets nearly 90,000 tons a year, half going to United States.
比较着选
哈哈ron说了不要改写句子
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啊看花了以为Argentina是一种蜂蜜的名字，没有仔细读句子
应该是de里面选
D 答案中的 it是单数，代不了 90,000 tons
表示时间/重量/钱数....etc. ，都是单数的呀
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E里面的half不用加一个代词点明是half of 90000 tons吗？ 单单一个half也可以理解为是0.5 ton啊
所以必须保证sold的主语是阿根廷。
D. it指代也有问题，作为和主句平行，it指代Argentina的话，句意不对；若指代honey，则为泛指，half of honey ，到底指什么，世界上一般的蜂蜜吗，句意也不对
abc：with nearly 9000 tons /the sale, 这里的因果关系应该是那个句子的whole idea而不是句子中的一个名词，selling确实比with好很多，只是E中后面的with让人耿耿于怀
没有令人信服的解释关于D为什么错。。。没有说非得要表示平行结构才能用and吧？
两个并列的句子或主从句的主语有代词时，代词与主语保持一致。
choice a 除了上面毕出的分析错误之外，还有一个错误，'half of which' should be followed by a working verb rather than a participial, 所以应该是half of which went to United States.
choice e 当时是应为后面那半段prep. phrase ',with almost half going to United States'不能理解，其实是可以的。其他例子：
-In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, selling to foreign markets nearly 90,000 tons a year, half (of them) going to United States.
这个解释太不能令人信服
感觉有选择的情况下with独立主格对的可能性不大啊
分词状语使得主句和从句逻辑更清晰
selling是对前面的解释吧然后后面的with又是对selling的解释？
题目中old应改为sold
已修改，谢谢指正。
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A：with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets是独立主格。我们知道，过去分词短语表达被动语态，其表明的是“有九千多吨一年被卖到了国外的市场上”，这句话没有指明是“谁”在把这九千吨东西卖到国际市场中。