Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
With charcoal's being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
这道题纠结了2分多钟,还是选错了,选了C,之前一直在B和C之间徘徊,现在hindsight一下:
A 一开始就把A排除了,因为as a result和because从句不平行(用平行筛选选项害人啊。。。)。除了这一点以外句子从语法到语义其实没有问题
B 纠结的时候觉得有问题的是两点:tripling用的awkward; in addition to改变了语义
C 楼下有同学说with不能表原因,但with是可以表示原因的。但纠结的时候觉得being replaced用的不对
D E很简单可以直接排除
回过头来看一下A确实是最好的选项
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