Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
With charcoal's being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
---by ruqi
A: as a result of several improvements和because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore并列。语法上是可以的,因为两者都是原因状语
B: 主干 a tripling was due to X, in addition to Y 改变了意思。在choice a中用and连接两个原因状语说明两个原因的权重是一样的,in addition to的结构中说明Y的重要性低一些
C: with being replaced and improvements介词短语结构在句首作伴随状语,注意不是独立主格,没有办法表达出因果的关系。因此相对choice a,b改变了意思;
D: 句首的名词replacement and improvement作为主句主语average output的同位语,逻辑错误
E: 缺少谓语动词
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