Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
With charcoal's being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
D错在哪里?是因为没有因果关系吗
D选项两个分句之间没有连词
D选项是独立主格结构吧
独立主格的结构是【名词+分词短语】
D选项前面分句的主干只是两个并列的名词,后面跟的【介词+分词】结构是名词的修饰部分,并木有构成独立主格结构呢。
D的前半句不是分句是短语吧,used缺了was。D现在的结构无法表达因果关系,前半句和后半句是一个因果关系,所以需要因果连词。
独立主格是名词+分词/形容词/副词/介词短语,都可以。我觉得这题的问题是replacement和improvement的问题,不应该用名词形式(名词表示结果),应该用分词形式才能比较好地表达出意思
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