Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
With charcoal's being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
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做这道题,首先要按绝对错误层级与相对错误层级划分
绝对错误
1.RUN-ON 排除E选项,E选项用众多修饰干扰视线,没有出现主语
2.逻辑不合理 排除D,B选项
B选项核心词变成a tripling,一个三倍是由于技术变革?当然不对
D选项结构是:同位语,SVO;失去了转折词,错误这个时候来对比AC,都没有语法上绝对的错误
相对层级
1.歧义
C选项有平行歧义,后面的improvement到底是和前面的fuel平行还是和charcoal‘s being replaced来平行呢
2.冗长
且C选项charcoal‘s being replaced by coal较于A选项的coal replaced charcoal冗长
择优选取,本题答案A
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