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Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether the Earth would warm and by how much, but climatologists have indicated all along that the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess.
the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess
the effects that are the most obvious ones, extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, would be those impacting the most on people
those effects to have the largest impact on people, extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, are what are the most obvious effects
extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, the most obvious effects, that they would have the largest impact on people
extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, which are the most obvious effects, are those to impact the most on people
B选项的错误点在于the effects that are the most obvious ones很wordy，不如the most obvious effects
其次B选项的平行错误：effects，extremes of temperature，precipitation，storminess并列，实际上应该是the most obvious effects和those（effects）that would have the largest impact on people 并列！！
我没有弄清those指代什么，所以做错了
虽然做对了 但是耗时很长...
过于注重 语感...反倒忽略了最根本的主谓宾齐全
看到后面几个选项的时候就应该反应过来that从句缺乏谓语应该是个大考点
Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether the Earth would warm and by how much==》虽然不是考点 但是这个平行：whether the earth
would warm and by how much好熟悉啊！！仿佛在哪个题里考过！！
why B wrongggg~~~~~QWQ
that the effects that 不优
时态
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关于effect的讨论focus on、、、但是，最重要的effect其实是、、、
希望老师能讲讲这题啊！~
其他的都改变了句子意思！ 语义为王
句意为王，green house effects(注意后文的effects和those都是说这个温室效应)往往focus在全球变暖以及变多暖上，但是(∥结构，说明表达逻辑上和前句一致着佳)学者说：最明显的效应以及对人影响最大的那些效应是三个极端天气现象。所以前句说effects是啥，但是其实effects是啥，这个平行语义，除了a，其他的都不平行∥
E选项中 which modifier为什么错了？是因为句意吗？
MARK. 根据原句语意可以排除 unparallel B/C
D but连接的独立句子没有verb
E which modifier
A里面
, and those that would have the largest impact on people,
这样不是把这个部分变成一个插入语作为modifier了么？感觉好怪啊
Choice C: 1. Repeats the same parallelism error as in Choice B.
2. “what are “ is not needed.
3. This choice distorts the intended meaning. It says that the effects that would have the largest impact are the most obvious ones.
Choice D: There is no verb for “extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess”. This leads to a fragment.
Choice E:
1. Use of “which” is incorrect.
2. “to impact the most on people” is ungrammatical.
Choice B: 1. “the effects that are the most obvious ones” is way too wordy when we can say “the most obvious effects”.
2. The parallel list has been violated. The entities in the list are now “effects”, “extreme of temperature”, “precipitation”, and “storminess”.
3. Reference of “those” is ambiguous.
4. “impacting the most on people” is absolutely ungrammatical. The correct expression is either “have impact on people” or “impacting people”.
Choice A: the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess: Correct for the reasons stated above.
https://gmatclub.com/forum/discussion-of-greenhouse-effects-has-usually-focused-on-81888.html
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真的假的？还没试过！那也太强了吧。
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B为什么不对
B选项中effects 和extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess就是并列关系了，逻辑上错了
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为什么b不对？
疑惑啊，A选项看着顺眼，可是用图形背景原则被第一个排除了。感觉A选项一直在说“动物是猫”，最后看来看去选了E。
应该是A没错。我觉得E的问题在于which 的就近指代，原文的意思应该是“极端降水，极端温度，极端风暴“这些是明显的影响。而E里面感觉只说了风暴这一个东西是明显结果。而且我之前做过的有关indicate，announce，predict好像一般都用的是would表示将来有可能发生的情况。open to discussion
还有我觉得 extremes……are those to impact the most on people 这个看起来好奇怪
嗯，谢谢。你说的对。我只是在运用“图形背景”原则的时候，在这个题目上乱了。
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