In 2000, a mere two dozen products accounted for half the increase in spending on prescription drugs, a phenomenon that is explained not just because of more expensive drugs but by the fact that doctors are writing many more prescriptions for higher-cost drugs.
a phenomenon that is explained not just because of more expensive drugs but by the fact that doctors are writing
a phenomenon that is explained not just by the fact that drugs are becoming more expensive but also by the fact that doctors are writing
a phenomenon occurring not just because of drugs that are becoming more expensive but because of doctors having also written
which occurred not just because drugs are becoming more expensive but doctors are also writing
which occurred not just because of more expensive drugs but because doctors have also written
题目分析:
本题中原文的划线部分是整个主句的同位语,(D)(E)两个选项是非限定性定语从句,只能就近修饰一个名词。
选项分析:
A选项:not…but…是平行制造者,它们连接的两者需要在语法上平行,即,not by…but by…或not because of…but because of…。本选项中它们连接的两者不平行。
B选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
C选项:because of是介词,其身后的 drugs that are becoming more expensive和doctors having also written many more prescriptions for higher-cost drugs均为名词短语,这两个名词短语的核心词分别是drugs和doctors。在逻辑上,原因应该是“药物变贵”和“医生开处方”这两件事,而不是药和医生这两个名词,因此本选项是错误的。
D选项:which occurred是非限定性定语从句,就近修饰先行词prescription drugs,在逻辑上,能被解释的肯定是“一个现象”而不是一种药。
E选项:which occurred错误同(D)。
我以为是修饰drugs的,其实是同位语
平行
B中 not just... but also 也算作平行。 不是只有not only 才能和 but also平行。
平行要严谨也要灵活。
选项A:not just ... but ... 应保持平行,because of和by不一致,可以排除。
除了其他显而易见的错误,在这里主要留一下CE选项中间also的位置, doctors have also done 那说明在前半句医生应该发出另外一个动作,但是在句子中却美欧,所以逻辑也是错误的。
选对了 但C 第一时间没要找到考点 还去纠结occuring。。
关注语义逻辑&核心词问题。不要只看语法。
A选项:’explained ‘and‘ because of ’赘余;not just because of ...but by the fact that...不平行;
C选项:also有问题;drugs that are becoming more expensive和doctors having also written many more prescriptions for higher-cost drugs均为名词短语,这两个名词短语的核心词分别是drugs和doctors。在逻辑上,原因应该是“药物变贵”和“医生开处方”这两件事,而不是药和医生这两个名词,因此本选项是错误的。
DE选项:which occurred是非限定性定语从句,就近修饰先行词prescription drugs,在逻辑上,能被解释的肯定是“一个现象”而不是一种药;also用法错误;不平行;
做对了 但C的核心词情况问题 没想到
平行结构
不仅而且 怎么是not just 和 but also ?
not...but... just和also都只是修饰副词罢辽
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平行+核心词
because of druge 和by the fact,在形式上都是介宾短语,应该是平行的,真正的问题应该是理由错误吧
c里的having down 有错吗,是用完成时吗
not ...but...是平行制造者,前后语法一致
主句,一个词做主句的同位语。
because of 后面不管是drugs还是doctors,考虑逻辑论元,核心词都错了吧?因为药涨价,不是因为药
是的。
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感觉c的错误不是因为平行吧两个because of是平行的呀,而是因为having done不能做定语吧…
已更正,感谢指正。
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CD which是定语从句,这儿explain的是前面那句话描述的事情,不应该用定语对吗
是的。
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对啦
我觉得核心词也是可以做出来的