There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:在逻辑上,“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”应该是两个并列的动作,因此两者应该在语法形式上保持一致。不能一个是名词短语the forming of bricks out of mud or clay,一个是句子they are laid in the wall in mud mortar。
B选项:平行错误同(A)。
C选项:平行错误同(A)。
D选项:Correct. 本选项中的“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”是平行的。
E选项:本选项中formed和laid也是完全平行的,这一点上没有错误,但是两者都是从句的形式,这一点考查了“不定式和从句的区别”。用之于本题,由于主语和系动词讲的是:the most extensively used method is xxx,由此可知“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”均为人为的主观性事件(主语是method嘛,肯定是主观刻意的去做这件事),因此表语需要用不定式短语的形式。
题目分析:
略
选项分析:
A选项:在逻辑上,“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”应该是两个并列的动作,因此两者应该在语形上保持一致。
B选项:平行错误同(A)。
C选项:平行错误同(A)。
D选项:Correct. 本选项中的“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”是平行的。
E选项:本选项中formed和laid也是完全平行的,这一点上没有错误,但是两者都是动词的形式,这一点考查了“动词和不定式的区别”。用之于本题可知,由于主语和系动词讲的是:the most extensively used method is xxx,所以它们对于form和lay的预测力是很强的,并且“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”这两件事在整个句子发生的时段中并没有发生,所以formed和laid应该用不定式的形式。
关于排除E,需要记住一个知识点:像strategy, plan这样的主语,大部分情况下也应该理解为主观性是比较强的
比如说,"The best strategy of country A is to make its citizens rich." "My plan is to review GMAT 3 hours a day."只要主语是plan类的,对表语所描述的事件都有“主观”的影响(表语讲的事件肯定是计划的内容,自然是被主观控制的嘛)
错因:看见after 以为事件发生有先后顺序,and 前后可以时态不一致,把时态平行和语法平行混淆了。在这里and 前后平行要是语法上的平行,不能是名词与句子的比较等等。
最广泛的方法是。。。客观事实,不应该夹杂时态 E错
form和lay是两个连续的动作,应该形式上平行
看到and,考虑平行
A、B、C不平行,排除
E,“由于主语和系动词讲的是:the most extensively used method is xxx,所以它们对于form和lay的预测力是很强的,并且“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”这两件事在整个句子发生的时段中并没有发生,所以formed和laid应该用不定式的形式"
D correct
and并列:“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)
去掉插入语:method has been 【to form ……】, and【to lay……】
选项D:(√)
There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay,
but the most extensively used method has been 【to form the mud or clay into bricks 动作1】, and【, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them in the wall in mud mortar 动作2】.
有几种方法可以仅使用泥或粘土来建造坚固的墙壁,
但最广泛使用的方法是【将泥或粘土制成砖块】,然后【在初步风干或晒干后,用泥浆砌筑墙内】。
选项A(×):平行对象成分不一致,因为名词短语和句子不能平行
method has been 【the forming of bricks out of mud or clay 名词短语】, and【, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar 句子】
——句意——
1.注意平行:[to form the mud or clay into bricks], and, [to lay them in the wall in mud mortar]✔
2.E选项:the method has been that这个方法是……❌
D选项: 【Ron】to do 是指具体要做的事情并强调步骤的意思,the methid has been to do这个方法是(怎么做)……✔
几个步骤应该是平行。
“不定式和从句的区别”。用之于本题,由于主语和系动词讲的是:the most extensively used method is xxx,由此可知“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”均为人为的主观性事件(主语是method嘛,肯定是主观刻意的去做这件事),因此表语需要用不定式短语的形式。
to form 和to lay平行
and 前后平行,to do... and to do ....;---D选项;
A不满足,名词性短语VS 句子;
B 动名词 VS 不定式;
C have done完成时态和过去时态
E method 表示主观刻意,用不定式 to do 更好
and 平行
不定式和从句的区别”。用之于本题,由于主语和系动词讲的是:the most extensively used method is xxx,由此可知“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”均为人为的主观性事件(主语是method嘛,肯定是主观刻意的去做这件事),因此表语需要用不定式短语的形式。
此外,前后的步骤逻辑上平行
注意语意逻辑,是平行
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看到and 就要想到平行啊啊啊啊
看到and, parallelism , 名词短语和句子不能平行。
As you can see, the entities in the list are a bit longer than usual. Moreover, the first entity has another list embedded in it (mud or clay). So a comma is put before the “and” for a breathing pause.
So the comma before "and" is only to help us in identifying the main list.
Note that the presence of a “comma + and” in a sentence doesn’t necessarily indicate that two or more Independent Clauses are connected. (The above sentence, for instance)
一定一定要找到作者真正最想让平行的两个内容
一定一定要正确识别插入语这个东西!!
应该是两个并列的动作,因此两者应该在语法形式上保持一致。不能一个是名词短语the forming of bricks out of mud or clay,一个是句子they are laid in the wall in mud mortar。
均为人为的主观性事件(主语是method嘛,肯定是主观刻意的去做这件事),因此表语需要用不定式短语的形式。
考点是平行 注意
在逻辑上,“把砖放入泥土中(form the mud or clay into bricks)”和“把砖安放的墙中(lay them in the wall in mud mortar)”应该是两个并列的动作,因此两者应该在语法形式上保持一致。排除ABC选项;E选项: which指代mud or clay,而不是bricks