At the end of 2001, motion picture industry representatives said that there were about a million copies of Hollywood movies available online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available.
online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available
online and expect the increase of piracy with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
online, and they expect more piracy to increase with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
online, and that they expected the increase of piracy as high-speed Internet connections would become more widely available
online, and that they expected piracy to increase as high-speed Internet connections became more widely available
题目分析:
本题有些难度,有些考点不易看出。实际上,从平行这个角度来说,五个选项都可以算正确。
选项分析:
A选项:本选项中expected和said平行,均由motion picture industry representatives发出,这点没有错误。唯一的错误出现在increase的状语上。其状语是一个介词短语(with high-speed internet connections that become more widely available),这个介词短语的核心词为connections。但是,在逻辑上,盗版不是伴随着“互联网的连接”而上升的,而应该是伴随着“互联网的连接被更加广泛的提供”而上升的(是更加广泛的接受导致盗版猖獗,而不是互联网连接导致盗版猖獗)。因此,increase的状语的核心词应该是become more widely available这整个系表结构,而不能是connections。
B选项:expect的宾语是名词短语the increase of piracy。这是不正确的。这点考查了“不定式和名词的区别”。用之于本题,expect的约束力较强,身后的宾语或宾补应该用不定式的形式。
C选项:expect应改为过去时expected;more和increase重复了,应该将more去掉。
D选项:the increase of错误同(B)。另外,在and身前加的逗号是完全没有问题的。英语中逗号可以表示一种语气的停顿,而并非要表达什么特殊的含义(除了限定性定语和非限定性定语外,非限定性定语身前的逗号是有意义的)。
E选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
More 和 increase 算重复吗?我觉得不算吧。。。
with表原因时,看介词后跟的核心名次,with不能表示一串逻辑关系,只能给出一个逻辑主因(名词),类似于beacuse of,可以是with the developement of internet connection,但不能是with the developing connection
expect的约束力较强,后面最好跟to do
我想知道and that they的那个that指代的是啥?
是宾语从句的连接词啦 said that...and that...
都有and了,为啥还要连词that 好气= =
不是,,这个句子是两个宾语从句在并列,and后面的that是引导词,我之前说错了不好意思,这种两个宾语从句并列that就是不能省略的~
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!!!主要错误是在the increase of piracy would become more widely available这句话。不是增加会变得越来越容易获得。而是盗版piracy会变得越来越容易获得。一个主语核心词是increase一个主语核心词是piracy,导致句子的语义产生了巨大的错误。
D: 名词的同步
E: 动作的同步
Generally, an as-clause must serve to modify an ACTION.
It cannot serve to modify a noun or noun phrase.
随着。。是一种变化,注意讨论的重心
重点是读懂句意 逻辑关系
relative jugements:
BD:expected the increase of piracy < expected piracy to increase
本题较难,ron认为BD有idiomatic problem,应该是expect sth没有expect sth to do这一过程好,同时也可以用语感判断,to increase和 become available 这两件事在语义上对应。
请问! Ron的解析能在哪里看??谢谢!
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因为是expected,在当时对未来的一种期望,那么D中的would的用法是否正确?
An error in D that does not rely on idiomatic knowledge:
Generally, an as-clause must serve to modify an ACTION.
It cannot serve to modify a noun or noun phrase.
D: the increase of piracy as high-speed Internet connections would become
Here, the as-clause in red incorrectly serves to modify not an action but a NOUN phrase (the increase of piracy).
Eliminate D.
A,状语核心词对语义的影响,mark
B,不定式,ing,名词的区别,需要加强
D,E “,and”后不一定为完整句
expect的约束力较强,身后的宾语或宾补应该用不定式的形式。
d也有歧义,可以是 increase of piracy would become more widely available,也可以是 high-speed Internet connections would become more widely available
的主要错误是在the increase of piracy would become more widely available这句话。不是增加会变得越来越容易获得。而是盗版piracy会变得越来越容易获得。一个主语核心词是increase一个主语核心词是piracy,导致句子的语义产生了巨大的错误。
expect的约束力较强后面用to do而不是名词形式。如选项B.D
本题是语义错误和名词与不定式的使用问题。
语义是盗版的增加伴随着互联网变得广泛。而不是盗版的增加伴随着互联网,后者是问题没有说清楚。
PS:expect表示期待、认为某事情的发生,而不是某事
A选项:expected的主语与online的主语不是一个;
B选项:同A
C选项:expect时态应为过去时;more & increase造成redundancy;
D选项:expected 后接”the increase of “有问题;expect sb/sth to do宾补可以;
"Piracy increases with availability" would be correct. (piracy increases, as availability increases.) - "X increases with Y" implies that as X increases, Y also increases. Thus, "Piracy increases with high-speed internet" /"piracy increases with wider availability" both are wrong. ---Better explanations
A excepted 发出的主语有歧义 应该是representatives而不是a million copies of Hollywood movies
B C except 应该是过去式
d except和would 一起不合适 逻辑是已经except了事情将发生。 那就不能再是虚拟语气would