The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
题目分析:
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选项分析:
A选项:Correct. 本选项在逻辑和语法上均是正确的。
B选项:growing as big as 30 feet long是现在分词短语,既可以做伴随状语,也可以做定语。由于The 32 species和whale均可以发出grow这个动作,所以growing as big as 30 feet long是由歧义的;另外,growing as big as 30 feet long至少应改为which can grow to be 30 feet long,这是因为,as big as仅表示“和...一样大”,但在逻辑上,并非每只the killer whale都会长到和30 feet一样大。应该说,the killer whale能长到30feet这么大(can grow to be)。
C选项:grow up to是“长大后会怎么样”的意思,例如:
They want me to grow up to be famous.
例句的意思是,他们希望我长大后能变得有名。显然地,本题中,你不能说the killer whale长大后能变得30feet。这个错误在原理上和选项(B)相同,并非每只the killer whale都会长到和30 feet一样大。
D选项:主谓不一致。主语The 32 species是一个复数,所以谓语动词也应该用复数。
E选项:本选项错误同(D);此外,grow应该和be famous在语法上平行,这部分应改为和选项(D)相同的构造。
can不能丢的
1.主谓一致,DE错
2.修饰,which修饰whale才对,BC错
3.句子结构,famous前面应该有Be动词才对,BD错
4.平行,BDE都不平行。BDE错
5.措辞,growing as big as 30 feet long是错的,不需要long了,不然就重复了,BD错
简单题
B/C伴随状语,主语为32 species,而逻辑主语应该是杀人鲸
D/E 主谓不一致,直接排除
A. Correct;which指代the killer whale,grow to和is famous for平行。
B. growing做伴随状语修饰了谓语动词include及其主语the 32 species,错误;as big as和long重复,用一个就好(size和length是同一概念)。
C. growing错误同B;being+adj.错误。
D. includes应用复数形式,因为主语是the 32 species,且与其平行的谓语动词用了are;grow as错误同B。
E. includes错误同D;which从句中犯了run-on sentence错误,it应该删去。
growing as big as 30 feet long是现在分词短语,既可以做伴随状语,也可以做定语。由于The 32 species和whale均可以发出grow这个动作,所以growing as big as 30 feet long是由歧义的;
as big as仅表示“和...一样大”,不能和long同时出现;
can grow to 表示能力,伴随表示状态。注意区分;grow up to be 长大后会怎么样
you don't say both "as big as..." and "long" in the same sentence. you can use only one of these words, both of which express the same idea (i.e., length or size).
注意B中的growing,不管是主句的主语,还是whale均可以发出,这样会造成歧义。
growing的主语只能是32 species
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The 32 species are closely related to whales and include the animal known as the killer whale,
这里的and不表示并列,表示强调和补充说明,补充说明他们相似的鲸鱼里还包括杀人鲸。
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考察
主谓一致
which修饰就近名词,doing不能修饰就近名词,而是修饰前面的句子,其逻辑主语也应该是前面句子的主语,有时候时前面动作的结果。
B:growing修饰有歧义,可以修饰the 32 species;其实我觉得growing as big as 30 feet long不对,到底是long还是big呢?应该是as long as 30 feet
C:being is wordy
B C 错误的原因是因为 ,ing修饰的是主句的逻辑主语 the 32 species,而不是杀人鲸,所以B C错。 另外as big as 不能和long连用,语义重复。
,doing 修饰前面的谓语动词啊 乖
一般放在句末的现在分词短语,一般是是最近靠近句子(动词)的伴随状语,如果是相当先行词的后置定语(取而代之可用定语从句),或要修饰之前的主句,最好避开把现在分词放在最后来完成。
一般放在句末的现在分词短语,要么是最近句子(从句)的伴随状语,要么是先行词的后置定语,如果是要修饰之前的主句最好避开放到最后
1. B中,doing放在句末,现在分词存在歧义,可能是修饰前一名词的定语,也可能是整句的伴随状语
2. as big as是像....一样大,而鲸鱼的size更应该是一个可变的范围,can更好
3. 长大后去做 grow up to do 长高长胖到某一程度 grow to be(some size)
可充当复合成分的结构:
v-ing既可以作伴随状语,也可以作简化定语
with结构既可以作独立主格(状语),也可以作定语
修饰前面的killer whale明显用,which 定语从句比起,doing来说更为贴切
定语从句的用法
,doing的用法
as big as仅表示“和...一样大”,但在逻辑上,并非每只the killer whale都会长到和30 feet一样大。应该说,the killer whale能长到30feet这么大(can grow to be),主语是The 32 species
can grow up to 一定要有can否则不合逻辑
growing as big as 30 feet long是现在分词短语,既可以做伴随状语,也可以做定语。由于The 32 species和whale均可以发出grow这个动作,所以growing as big as 30 feet long是由歧义的;另外,growing as big as 30 feet long至少应改为which can grow to be 30 feet long,这是因为,as big as仅表示“和...一样大”,但在逻辑上,并非每只the killer whale都会长到和30 feet一样大。应该说,the killer whale能长到30feet这么大(can grow to be)。