The 19-year-old pianist and composer performed his most recent work all over Europe, Asia, and North America last year, winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago.
winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping
winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and hoping
having won prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, hoping
winning prestigious awards in both London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and he hopes
having won prestigious awards both in London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he hopes
题目分析:
略
选项分析:
A选项:both…and…为习惯表达,不能用both + as well as。
B选项:并列连词and身后的ing短语hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago在and身前没有平行对象。注意,此处的winning和hoping不能平行。这是因为and身前的逗号将winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age变成了插入语(两端的逗号隔开了这个短语和主句)。
另外,both…and…具有平行错误。只能说both in London and in Tokyo。
C选项:both…and…具有平行错误同(B)。另外,having won应改为winning。在分词短语中加have表示先时性,在逻辑上,不可能win这个动作先发生于perform。
D选项:Correct. 本选项在逻辑和语法上均是正确的。
E选项:both的习语错误同(A);having won错误同(C)。
注意B中and hoping 不是和winning品行的这一点,还是和前几题说的一样,这里逗号隔开并列必须是三个事物或者是两种句子。
这题用both...and这种硬性条件就可以把答案选出来了~
另外,having won应改为winning。在分词短语中加have表示先时性,在逻辑上,不可能win这个动作先发生于perform。
now that现在已经
B选项:并列连词and身后的ing短语hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago在and身前没有平行对象。注意,此处的winning和hoping不能平行。这是因为and身前的逗号将winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age变成了插入语(两端的逗号隔开了这个短语和主句)。
both in and in BC排除 as well as AE排除
剩下了D
考察:
both and 平行,both as well as错误用法
B: it's illogical to make winning and hoping parallel, because they aren't simultaneous.
B选项的OG解析是winning平行于hoping, 但是因为这样不符合逻辑, 所以错的.
having won应改为winning。在分词短语中加have表示先时性,在逻辑上,不可能win这个动作先发生于perform。
having won为什么是发生在performed 之间,现在分词和过去时时间节点不是douf都发生在过去吗、
having won应改为winning。在分词短语中加have表示先时性,在逻辑上,不可能win这个动作先发生于perform
此处的winning和hoping不能平行。这是因为and身前的逗号将winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age变成了插入语(两端的逗号隔开了这个短语和主句)。
在分词短语中加have表示先时性,在逻辑上,不可能win这个动作先发生于perform。即慎重使用having done做伴随状语,注意动作的发生顺序
B选项:winning 和 hoping的平行,代表了两个的同时性,可是它俩事有个先后顺序的;
C选项:having won表示这件事发生在performance之前;winning 和 hoping的平行,代表了两个的同时性,可是它俩事有个先后顺序的,而hopes now表示现在hope的事情,不是去年的事情,所以不能用现在分词,而应该另起一个句子说明;
A选项both...and...是习惯表达;B选项both...and...引导的平行结构不平行,且hoping没有平行对象,不能和插入语里面的成分平行;C选项having won错误,在分词短语里在having表示先时性,但是won这个动作不可能发生在Perform前面;E选项having错误同C,both...as well as错误同A
both...and...考平行。
再排一下一楼,我也记得伴随状语先于主句时态,老师的书上有提过。
请问C选项中,having won是插入语还是可以看做和hoping平行?
我觉得是平行的话也要加and,就是doing and doing ,你不加的话,我可以认为hoping 的粉刺短语是修饰前面的having won短语,或者是某某的后置定语,
从句意的逻辑性上看,winning prestigious awards的内容和hope to continue composing无法构成平行,即如果硬要组成平行结构,即句意有误。
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为什么这里可以用hope to do呢?还是说因为约束力的关系,只是不能用hope sb to do呢?
对啦