In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying earthquake damage and to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event.
In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying
In preparing for the prediction that a major earthquake will hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite based computer network that will identify
In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network to identify
To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services to identify
To prepare for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify
A In this version of the sentence, the opening phrase illogically claims that
the California Office is preparing for a prediction, but later in the sentence it
becomes clear that the preparations are targeted to the aftermath of a
possible earthquake, not its prediction.
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