Once numbering in the millions worldwide, it is estimated that the wolf has declined to 200,000 in 57 countries, some 11,000 of them to be found in the lower 48 United States and Alaska.
it is estimated that the wolf has declined to 200,000 in 57 countries, some
the wolf is estimated to have declined to 200,000 in 57 countries, with approximately
the wolf has declined to an estimate of 200,000 in 57 countries, some
wolves have declined to an estimate of 200,000 in 57 countries, with approximately
wolves have declined to an estimated 200,000 in 57 countries, some
排除wolf ,在DE做选择,CD以及外网论坛较多的解释是comma with 的问题
Generally, COMMA + with after a clause must serve to express HOW the preceding action is performed.
D: Wolves have declined, with approximately 11,000 of them to be found in the lower 48 States.
Here, the COMMA + with modifier in red serves to express not how wolves HAVE DECLINED (the preceding action) but where they are currently FOUND.
Since the COMMA + with modifier is misused, eliminate Dbut,
之前在独立主格的帖子中看到,独立主格有好多种形式,with结构的独立主格(d)以及一般形式的独立主格(e),有什么本质区别吗,
再看下面这个我从别的帖子搬来的独立主格与with的关系:在独立主格的一般形式中,前面都可以加一个with构成复合结构,这个with可加可不加,不影响原句的意思,且上述的独立主格的特殊形式不加with ,所以为什么这道题with的独立主格和一般的独立主格就有区别了,难道一般的独立主格不能表示伴随修饰前面的动作吗,求大神救救孩子!
选项E中的some 11000 of them实际上是同位语,并不是独立主格。它只描述名词,和动作其实是无关的。选项D中的with xxx是状语,描述动作decline。
但这个题不应该去看判断some和with,从解题角度来说,我们要看大不看小。选项D主句的主干信息为“wolf decline estimate”,意思是,狼降到了一个估计上。选项E的主干信息为“wolf decline 200,000”,意思是,狼降到了一个数字上。从常理上来说,狼应该是会降到一个数字上,不是估计(估计也是估计的数字)。
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求问选项D怎么排除?是因为with么?
也是也不是。从解题角度来说,我们要看大不看小。选项D主句的主干信息为“wolf decline estimate”,意思是,狼降到了一个估计上。选项E的主干信息为“wolf decline 200,000”,意思是,狼降到了一个数字上。从常理上来说,狼应该是会降到一个数字上,不是估计(估计也是估计的数字)。至于with的问题,确实也是有错的。选项D中逗号以后是状语,选项E是同位语。D在描述动作,而E在描述200,000。逻辑上很明显应该描述数字,和下降这个动作没关系。
但当然,with的问题不应该在实战时被考虑。因为主句的主干有问题,一定是先解决主句主干问题。
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这道题就觉得奇怪,为啥狼可以减少到一个数字,不是狼的population减少嘛?
A主语不对
BC them 要对应wolves
D decline to a number 而不是estimate
开头的modifier是"numbering in the millions",所以后面的wolfs应该是decline to a number,感觉这样能前后对应上。
subject是wolfs,后半部分的主体"11000 of them"还是指的wolfs,所以同位语更为合适,如果用with...的独立主格,独立主格的主体应该是除了wolfs之外的物体。
求教一下D和E,谢谢
some 大约
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更合逻辑的表示是some of them to be found…
【subgroup modifier,N+modifier形式做独立主格句,修饰句子主体】
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B the wolf 是特指,这里应该指代的是狼这个种群,the wolf就不合适;
with 11000 of them to be found 是做状语, have declined… with …这里的with做伴随不合逻辑,表示的两个动作同时发生了。【A COMMA + with modifier must serve to express HOW the preceding action is facilitated. EG:Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline. 】
未划线部分出现them,注意只能是复数形式
declined to +number
a decline should be to a number,not an estimate
找到这道题想考察的点了,纠结了半天误以为e里面是一个数字,所以不能用同位语解释
wolves have declined to后接一个number, 而不应该是an estimate;而E中的an estimated 200,000算是一个number.
大家是同位语,但是我不太明白那个句子修饰的是哪个词?
独立主格无副词,approximately失去修饰对象
D 中 下降应该是个数字 核心词错了
第一 后面有个of them 没注意....可以排除BC
Once numbering...,决定主句的主语是名词复数,DE选项,D中:wolves have declined to后接一个number, 而不应该是an estimate;而E中的an estimated 200,000算是一个number.
Incidentally, the use of "some" in this context is as a synonym for "approximately." Other examples:
I read that book some fifteen years ago.
we have a modifying phrase "once numbering in the millions worldwide," and this phrase needs to touch the noun it modifies.so (A) is incorrect. B) is passive and indirect and wordy, and has that awful preposition after the final comma.
"estimate" or "is estimated" is should not be the main verb.