Ancient hunter-gatherers developed instincts that stigmatized selfishness, and voluntary cooperation was encouraged as well, whether it be within the group or also with outsiders.
selfishness, and voluntary cooperation was encouraged as well, whether it be within the group or
selfishness, encouraging voluntary cooperation as well, both within the group but
selfishness and also encouraging voluntary cooperation, within the group and
selfishness and they encouraged voluntary cooperation, whether it be within the group or
selfishness and encouraged voluntary cooperation, not only within the group but
考点: 平行对称(Parallelism)、简洁有效(Rhetorical Construction)、指代一致(Agreement)
1) not only…but also…连接的对象一定要平行
2) 主动语态优于被动语态
3) 并列句主语相同,应该省略重复的主语.
(A) 使用被动语态(was encouraged…),增加句子的复杂性;whether开头的结构笨拙复杂,且it没有可以指代的对象.
(B) –ing结构encouraging…作为stigmatized selfness的伴随成分,而从句子的逻辑意思上看,该成分应该跟stigmatized并列;both…but also结构不符合习惯用法.应该改为not only…but also或者both…and结构
(C) also encouraging和stigmatized不平行
(D) 并列句主句相同,they应该省略;如果一定要用they的话,and前面必须用逗号隔开,构成一个新的句子;whether…or also结构笨拙复杂,且it没有可以指代的对象
(E) 正确, encouraged同developed构成并列谓语;not only…but also符合习惯用法
句子结构: Ancient hunter-gatherers developed instincts that stigmatized…, and encouraged…, not only with…but also with…
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