Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing more women in leadership positions in politics and business.
Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing
The majority of students entering law school this fall are expected to be women, a trend that will ultimately place
The majority of students entering law school this fall are expected to be women, which will ultimately place
It is expected that the majority of students entering law school this fall will be women, a trend ultimately placing
It is expected for women to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, which will ultimately place
all you need to know, there, is that __ing modifiers have to adopt the timeframe of ... something in the sentence.
NOTHING in that sentence is happening in the same timeframe as "placing women...".
that placement is something that won't occur until well after everything else in the sentence -- many many years after these women are students.
since the __ing modifier doesn't share a timeframe with ANYTHING in the sentence ... it's wrong!
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