Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing more women in leadership positions in politics and business.
Women are expected to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, a trend ultimately placing
The majority of students entering law school this fall are expected to be women, a trend that will ultimately place
The majority of students entering law school this fall are expected to be women, which will ultimately place
It is expected that the majority of students entering law school this fall will be women, a trend ultimately placing
It is expected for women to be the majority of students entering law school this fall, which will ultimately place
真正“be expected”的是学生的构成,而不是“women”。
2、ing往往表伴随,wil才表预测。明显不是伴随啊。
3、ltimately蕴含有发生在未来的含义,所以应当搭配将来时,所以是will ultimately place
4、-ING modifiers don't have a tense. they automatically adopt the tense of the clause to which they're attached.
A还有错的原因是 this fall的位置,可以用来修饰整句,表示今年秋季被认为,也可以用来修饰今年秋季入学的学生。
ultimately蕴含有发生在未来的含义,所以应当搭配将来时,所以是will ultimately place【来自曼哈顿语法Chapter10】
ultimately通常要搭配will来表示未来
注意点:ing的现在进行含义;将来时态;时间副词位置防止歧义。
从句有动词可以表达时态
A还有错的原因是 this fall的位置,可以用来修饰整句,表示今年秋季被认为,也可以用来修饰今年秋季入学的学生。
一定要注意小词的位置 读题的时候就要往偏了读看看会不会又歧义
ultimately通常要搭配will来表示未来
句子结构-(概括性)同位语,a trend 概括前面描述的现象。
指代一致-which 指代,which 和同位语结构同时出现,表明应该用同位语结构,因为 which 不能指代
前面整个句子。
逻辑表达-修饰,分词和 that 从句修饰一个名词,要看从句是否有表达分词不能表达的逻辑含义,如
果是则选从句,反之选分词修饰更加简洁。
a trend ultimately placing ... 不能理解为独立主格,逻辑不对。
a/d.placing women 的time frame 和句子中的哪一个部分都不太符合
a. expected对象有问题