A study on couples' retirement transitions found that women who took new jobs after retiring from their primary careers reported high marital satisfaction, more than when retiring completely.
more than when retiring
more than if they were to retire
more so than those who retired
which was more so than those retiring
which was more than if they had retired
A) 缺少指代women的代词,致使more than的比较对象不对等,satisfaction与when retiring对比。
(B) they指代前面的women,表达意思错误,因为if they were to retire表达了同一群妇女不同情况下的satisfaction对比,改变了原句意思,原句要表达的是不同妇女不同情况下的satisfaction对比;more than前后不平行。
(C) 正确,those指代women,who took和who retired平行。
(D) which与so都指代satisfaction,重复;which就近修饰satisfaction不符合语义
(E) they指代前面的women,表达意思错误,与A选项相同;没有特殊的时间标志说明需要用过去完成时had retired。
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