A study on couples' retirement transitions found that women who took new jobs after retiring from their primary careers reported high marital satisfaction, more than when retiring completely.
more than when retiring
more than if they were to retire
more so than those who retired
which was more so than those retiring
which was more than if they had retired
又错一遍。。。这里比较的women应该是两批不同的人,一批继续工作,一批完全退休,因此不能用they来指代,应该用those。
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