Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
One out of every eight workers were employed in automobile-related jobs in the 1920's, with the American economy being dominated by the automobile industry.
The automobile industry dominated the American economy in the 1920's, with one of every eight workers having been employed in automobile-related jobs.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry had dominated the American economy, when one out of every eight workers was employed in an automobile-related job.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry dominated the American economy, with one out of every eight workers employed in an automobile-related job.
dominated the American economy in the 1920's是one of every eight workers为 xx industry工作的结果,所以不应放在主句里,反而应该成为独立主格
A选项的核心词有问题
这里有几个原则需要补充
①时间状语的位置,不是考点,不需要考虑,
②句子强调重心的变化需要注意,如B:改变了原句的句子强调重心,没必要
D和E:这里需要考虑的是tense
in the 1920‘s→意味着使用过去式,而非过去完成式,排除
(B) with the American economy being dominated的表达方式不如直接用动词形式更简洁有效,而且被动语态的表达方式也不够清楚;原句的主谓语the automobile industry dominated…变成了修饰成分,改变了原句强调重心。
(C) 时间状语in the 1920’s的位置不正确,应该置于句首修饰整个句子;one of every eight workers与原句要表达的one out of every eight workers不同,前者是“八人中的一人”,而后者是“每八人中就有一人”;with… having been…的表达方式不清楚。
(D) in the 1920’s是过去的时间,应该用过去时态,而不是过去完成时态;由when引导时间状语从句,改变了原句所要表达的意思。
个人觉得独立主格不存在时态问题了,have done直接排除
C选项,独立主格结构也可以放在主句的后面,表示伴随的状态或结果。dominated the American economy in the 1920's是one of every eight workers为 xx industry工作的结果,所以不应放在主句里,反而应该成为独立主格
A选项的核心词有问题
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