On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be the rate that trees grow, as seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of their trunks.
On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be the rate that trees grow
On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are, it is believed, the rate of tree growth
On Earth, the rate at which trees grow is believed to be among the surest indications of sunspot cycles
Among the surest indications on Earth of sunspot cycles, believed to be the tree growth rate
Among the surest indications on Earth of sunspot cycles is believed to be the rate at which trees grow
树木生长的速度被认为是地球上太阳黑子周期最可靠的迹象之一
(A) among倒装,主语应该是the rate,所以应该用单数is。
(B) among倒装,主语应该是the rate,所以应该用单数is;tree应该用复数,使未划线部分的their有 一致的指代对象。
(C) on earth 放置句首修饰整个句子,不符合逻辑;their 的指代存在歧义,离它最近的是 sunspot cycles,未划线部分的 as seen 应该要紧跟其修饰的名词。
(D) tree应该用复数,使未划线部分的their有一致的指代对象;谓语结构不完整,应该用is believed被动语态。
(E) 正确,on Earth修饰indications,主语是the rate,谓语动词用单数is。
on earth是一方面,但不是硬伤。硬伤来自于后面 as seen的修饰对象。as seen说的是“正如(我们在)树桩上的年轮所看到的那样”。从语义上,应该修饰树的成长,把句子还原就是,trees grow at the rate as seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of their trunks. 树木增长的速度,从树桩上年轮的圈上可见一斑。
C选项,使得as seen的修饰对象变成了sunspot cycles,语义完全错误了。
as seen做伴随状语逻辑主语在C和E中都是trees吧 从这点上来说C不存在问题
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