In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African cave paintings.
Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
Leakey was a contributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
Leakey's contributions to archaeology include discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of
题目分析:
本题有一定的难度。in addition to的意思是:除…之外…。其连接的两个名词不一定要具有可比的关系,例如,我们可以说:
In addition to the tractor, we have acquired a new rice transplanter. (除了拖拉机,我们又添了一台插秧机。)
例句中的tractor显然和we是不可比的,但是这个例句是正确的。因此,不能用her work和Mary Leakey不可比排除掉选项(A)(B)(C)。
选项分析:
A选项:本选项在语法上没有问题。名词短语her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity和动名词短语documenting East African cave paintings是平行的,因为都可以算作名词短语。但是,我们应该将动名词短语documenting East African cave paintings改为名词短语her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings,这点考查了名词和ing的区别。用之于本题,“记录下东非的洞穴壁画”在本句中显然是一个有时间终止点的行为,尤其是主句已经谈到Mary Leakey对考古的贡献了,贡献的东西,一定是在过去已经结束的事件。
B选项:动名词短语documenting East African cave paintings应改为名词短语her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings,该错误同选项(A)。
C选项:本选项用了Mary Leakey was a contributor…with x and with y的句型,没有明确Mary Leakey的贡献与x、y之间的关系,be a contributor的意思同主谓关系不同。例如:
(1) I sing a song by my iPhone.
(2) I am a singer of a song by iPhone.
句(1)描述的是一个事件,句(2)则是对“我”的一个定义。句(2)的意思是,我是一个通过iPhone唱歌的歌手。言下之意是,我一般都是用iPhone唱歌的,不会登上舞台等等。
同理,本选项的意思是:Mary Leakey是一个利用发现和记录至于考古学的贡献者。言下之意是,Mary Leakey一般都是用她对于人类行为的发现和对于东非的洞穴壁画的记录来贡献于考古的,不会用其它方式对考古做贡献。显然地,通过题目中所给的信息,我们无法得到这样的结论。只能说,Mary Leakey做的一个事件,而不能给Mary Leakey定性。
D选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
E选项:动名词短语discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity应改为名词短语her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity,该错误同理于选项(A)。
Mary Leakey做的一个事件,而不能给Mary Leakey定性。
C改变语义,给L下了定义;原句应该讲述一件事
C 改变了主语的语义,核心词是她是一个贡献者 而原句强调贡献这个动作
painstaking adj.煞费苦心的
复杂动名词和简单动名词的区别
Mary Leakey是一个利用发现和记录至于考古学的贡献者。言下之意是,Mary Leakey一般都是用她对于人类行为的发现和对于东非的洞穴壁画的记录来贡献于考古的,不会用其它方式对考古做贡献。显然地,通过题目中所给的信息,我们无法得到这样的结论。只能说,Mary Leakey做的一个事件,而不能给Mary Leakey定性。
我对这道题持有不同的意见,如下
①pronoun “her”要求一个antecedent,所有格不再是名词,不能做her的antecedent,由此排除D,E;
②and要求平行,由此排除A,B
所以,我认为应该选C
毕老师对C的分析太绕,太玄幻,不应该作为考点来判断。
重要的还是意思,仔细分析。
in addition to 不需要可比;此题在于名词与动名词的区别
e and前后不平行,前者是动名词discovering,后者是名词documentation
it should be clear that her work + her discovery + her documentation is more parallel than her work + by her discovery + by her painstakingly documenting.
her work, her discovery, her painstaking documentation三者平行。
三个noun平行最好。
C选项,即使允许in addition to 与 author并列,但后面因为没有出现裸noun 的documentation,所以不对。
可不可以用“action nouns只能和complex gerund平行,而不能和simple gerund平行”来认为documenting应加冠词变complex gerund,从而排除AB?
her work, her discovery, her painstaking documentation三者平行。
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/in-addition-to-her-work-on-the-miocene-homicide-fossil-t499.html
In addition to整个词组相当于一个介词,所以to的后面要接宾语.例如:
In addition to native plants,this garden contains numerous trees and flowers from overseas.
第二次错
哦哦老师已经解释了,谢谢!
【求教】根据您的知识点:“ing短语表达的是一种“过程”,通常在句中没有明确的时间终点,相反地,名词短语一般在句中具有明确的时间终点。”那么A那种documenting是不是反而不对了呢?
代词不是只能代指名词吗?D中her指代的在所有格中,这也可以吗?
严格来说,所有格中的名词其实也是名词。例如:
legs of table.
我们只能说,of table是形容词性的,因为在描述legs。但是,table本身还是名词性,因为这个词组讲的是“桌子拥有的腿”。不同于名词做定语,例如:
woman teacher
这里的woman是纯粹形容词性的,通常不能用代词指代。
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(D)中her work,her discovery,her documentation都平行