First discovered more than 30 years ago, Lina's sunbird, a four-and-a-half-inch animal found in the Philippines and that resembles a hummingbird, has shimmering metallic colors on its head; a brilliant orange patch, bordered with red tufts, in the center of its breast; and a red eye.
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1.句子结构,BE的that让主句没有谓语了。BE错
2.平行,and前后要平行,and后面用that导致跟前面不平行。
而且还有一个问题,如果用that,这个句子就变成了Lina's sunbird,that resembles a hummingbird...
用逗号+that作定语是不正常的用法,要么不要逗号,要么改成Which,要么用动词的分词表示更正常。
ABDE都不太好
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