Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress
According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed
Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing
根据Ron:based on, due to, caused by只可修饰noun(如主语),不可修饰句子!based on修饰的是主句主语
this is literally saying that "each year young Athenian women" are based on records from ancient Athens. That makes no sense at all. A conclusion or a finding or a report could be "based on records", but the women themselves certainly can't be. (A)(B) is out.
(C)the use of "according to records from ancient Athens" in this case is OK,the real issue is parallelism.
"……women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that…and that this robe depicted……“ 后半部分平行结构nonsense.
(B)(E)中“had collaborated"时态不妥:I suppose that they collaborated before they used the robe to dress a statue, but I think it's awfully weird to say that they "had collaborated" first, and then the robe later "depicted scenes." 如果真的确定时态好不好,先判断其他split!
登录 或 注册 后可以参加讨论