Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed more than 50 years ago.
while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have
while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time, which have
but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have
but at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
"while" is a subordinating construction, not a coordinating one, so it doesn't have the same strict parallelism requirements as does "but".
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C中they 与后面的they指代两个不同的东西,一句子中,一个相同的代词指代两个东西不行
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