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The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
of their not paying back their loans on time,
of not paying back their loans on time, a group
of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
that they do not pay back their loans on time,
that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
题目分析：
略。
选项分析：
A选项：首先，介词短语of their not paying back their loans是proven records的定语。但是其中第一个代词their是赘余的，records已经是borrowers的定语了，并且其身后已经说了是偿还“他们”的贷款；其次，collectively known as the subprime lending market是过去分词短语，其做定语具有就近修饰原则，先行词为loans。但在逻辑上，被认为是次贷市场的应是这些borroers。
B选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。a group collectively known as the subprime lending market是borrowers的同位语。
C选项：Such在句中没有指代对象， 直接用a group作borrowers的同位语即可。
D选项：that they do not pay back their loans on time是records的同位语从句。这个同位语从句至少要用过去时，即，they did not pay back loans。另外，过去分词短语collectively known as the subprime lending market修饰错误同选项(A)。
E选项：同位语从句错误同选项(D)；such错误同选项(C)。
A：还贷行为不在乎是谁还钱，只要还上就行，因此不需要是their not paying back，可以是Everybody’s paying back even the god
C：意群先看长相，先判断成分，再看意思；with such a group是独立主格状语，lend money行为不可能伴随着with such a group次贷市场
DE：that引导的同位语从句，和of表示特性不一样，是在说明抽象名词的内容；在这个语境下不能说是proven records的内容
of+定语 vs that引导的同位语从句
of是修饰其从属和特征，that是阐释其内容，要看哪个从逻辑上更符合原句
"such a group" in E is wrong because there is no word " group" in the early part of the sentence
the following must be correct:
I like the group of students and such a group can be a good community
as long as you mention some specific "X" earlier in the sentence, then "such an X" is fine, yes.
another example:
i have no problem with using a standard geometry textbook; indeed, such a book is helpful in providing ready-made sets of practice problems.
--> "such a book" is legitimate because the sentence has mentioned a particular book (namely, a standard geometry textbook).
such + noun 中的noun一定要在前文中出现过
A 出现两个their冗余，同位语次贷市场修饰不和语义
C such无指代，group在这里是第一次出现
D 时态与主句不一致，同位语没正确修饰对象
E 同D,C错
不是定语从句，这个是同位语从句 proven records 不用在同位语从句中充当成分的，同位语从句是解释说明proven records。只是同位语从句的时态错了。登录 或 注册 后可以参加讨论