In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
with the simple thesis of consumers having
which had the simple thesis of consumers having
where the thesis was simple: consumers having
with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
whose thesis was simple: consumers have
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:介词短语of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy是the simple thesis的定语,这个定语部分的核心词为consumers(having the power是现在分词短语,做consumers的定语)。在逻辑上,一个简单的主题应该是一件事,即,消费者有改变的权力,而不是消费者本身(一定是消费者做了什么事为主题,没有消费者的主题)。因此,这个介词短语应改为一个同位语从句。
B选项:核心词错误同选项(A)。
C选项:连词where引导的定语从句必须修饰地点名词,不能修饰Shopping for a Better World。另外,冒号后虽然可以用名词短语,但此处冒号后的核心词变成了consumers,错误同选项(A)。
D选项:with a thesis that is a simple one是一个介词短语,其看起来可以是主句the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World的状语。但在逻辑上,应该是Shopping for a Better World这本杂志的主题,不能是publish的主题。
E选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
who只能指代人,whose既可以指代人也可以指代物。
逻辑上,一个简单的主题应该是一件事,即,消费者有改变的权力,而不是消费者本身(一定是消费者做了什么事为主题,没有消费者的主题)。因此,AB的介词短语应改为一个同位语从句。
who只能指代人,whose既可以指代人也可以指代物。
with a thesis that is a simple one:介词短语作为状语,修饰前面的动作v.-- publish (语义不通)
whose thesis was simple: consumers have:定语从句修饰前面的名词n. --Shopping for a Better World. (语义合理)
In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing 【Shopping for a Better World, whose thesis】 was simple: consumers have the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
1988 年,经济优先委员会开始出版《为更美好的世界而购物》,《为更美好的世界而购物》的论点很简单:消费者有权通过拒绝购买的简单权宜之计改变公司。
who只能指代人,whose既可以指代人也可以指代物。
with a thesis that is a simple one:介词短语作为状语,修饰前面的动作v.-- publish (语义不通)
whose thesis was simple: consumers have:定语从句修饰前面的名词n. --Shopping for a Better World. (语义合理)
In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing 【Shopping for a Better World, whose thesis】 was simple: consumers have the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
1988 年,经济优先委员会开始出版《为更美好的世界而购物》,《为更美好的世界而购物》的论点很简单:消费者有权通过拒绝购买的简单权宜之计改变公司。
A&D选项: 【,with】状语,修饰动词publish,而后边的东西明显应该link到那个名词才对;(e.g. D选项中with a thesis that is a simple one是一个介词短语,其看起来可以是主句the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World的状语。但在逻辑上,应该是Shopping for a Better World这本杂志的主题,不能是publish的主题。)
A选项:介词短语of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy是the simple thesis的定语,这个定语部分的核心词为consumers(having the power是现在分词短语,做consumers的定语)。在逻辑上,一个简单的主题应该是一件事,即,消费者有改变的权力,而不是消费者本身(一定是消费者做了什么事为主题,没有消费者的主题)。因此,这个介词短语应改为一个同位语从句。
whose不是只能指代“谁的”,但凡是从句需要连接词表达“从属关系”,都要用whose!!!
(E)whose不一定指人,也可指機關
1. 核心词错误:ABC
2. D with a thesis that is a simple one是一个介词短语,其看起来可以是主句the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World的状语。但在逻辑上,应该是Shopping for a Better World这本杂志的主题,不能是publish的主题。
"A 【,with】状语,修饰动词publish,而后边的东西明显应该link到那个名词才对;thesis的核心是consumers,把have power给搞成定语了,不对。
B which从句的核心是主题,但句意表达的是主题是什么
C where要修饰具体地点;冒号后边的不成句子
D 【,with】错
E 正确"
1) thesis 应该是属于 Shopping for a Better World
2) with 状语从句
在这道题的帮助下,终于搞清了独立主格和同位语的概念。。。
whose既可以修饰人、也可以是物品,只要有所有格就行
whose既可以修饰人、也可以是物品,只要有所有格就行
A) comma + with = comma + prepositional modifier...modifies the entire previous clause.......which is not correct....it should modify the immediate preceding noun....so we should not use comma + preposition setup.
B) had is incorrect tense.....
C) where is used to modify places.
D) same as A.
E) Correct.
b。of NOUN VERBing is an incorrect construction if the "VERBing" is actually meant to be the object of the preposition
核心词为consumers就可以把ing看作n modifier,这里核心是整个句子,重心在having the power,所以错
whose跳跃修饰
whose人或者物,begin publish 而不是begin publish on
of NOUN VERBing is an incorrect construction if the "VERBing" is actually meant to be the object of the preposition
去掉verbing 句意仍然要make sense 这在A、B中做不到的
with结构不是做定语 而是做状语 而thesis应该做这本杂志的定语
做题时要注意短语的核心词。
whose既可以指代人,也可以指代物
D:状语修饰的是谓语,定语才能修饰宾语
并且需要注意定语短语的核心词 AB