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Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
题目分析：
略。
选项分析：
A选项：状语in 1909修饰其身后的句子Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist，这是不正确的。不能说SL这个人在1909年才成为小说家，而是SL一直是小说家，到了1909年才获奖。因此，1909应该修饰 Selma Lagerlöf became the first woman。另外，定语从句who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer需改为 who became the first woman and also became the first Swedish writer。这是因为，第一位女性和第一位瑞士作家应该是同时间的两个状态，不能一个用became一个用was。
B选项：as well as虽然可以是连词，但其连接两者的后者在地位上要弱于前者，这点和and不同，and是纯粹的并列。在本题中，两个角色显然没有强弱区别，因此as well as需改为and。另外，定语从句that won the Nobel Prize for Literature应改为不定式短语to win the Nobel Prize for Literature，这点考查了不定式和从句的区别，用之于本题，“变成第一位女性和第一位瑞士作家”会直接影响“赢得诺贝尔奖”这一事件的发生与否，因此应该用不定式短语。
C选项：副词in addition to需改为并列连词and，became the first woman和was also the first Swedish write应具有并列关系。另外，winning the Nobel Prize for Literature应改为不定式短语to win the Nobel Prize for Literature，这点考查了不定式和ing的区别，该错误原理同(B)。
D选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
E选项：定语从句that won the Nobel Prize for Literature应改为不定式短语to win the Nobel Prize for Literature错误同选项(B)。
注意代词指代的准确性
B.actually, the way the parallelism is written here, "she" doesn't mean selma.
if i say "he wrote the first half, and jim wrote the second half", then the one thing of which you can be absolutely sure is that jim didn't write the first half.
Become sb to do sth, 这个结构才能确保后面修饰到the First Lady and first Swedish
c: was a novelist表示好像现在不是novelist了，语义不对
这个参考答案稍有模糊，搬运RON的解释A.ing修饰语修饰逗号后面紧跟的单词，错B.She 在Selma前面，这是不对的。
actually, the way the parallelism is written here, "she" doesn't mean selma.if i say "he wrote the first half, and jim wrote the second half", then the one thing of which you can be absolutely sure is that jim didn't write the first half.
C. .i don't like "was a novelist" either; it seems to imply that selma stopped being a novelist at some point, becoming something else."
A novelist。。。， SL became。。。 第一反应run on首先排除了，，，
这个参考答案稍有模糊，搬运RON的解释
A.ing修饰语修饰逗号后面紧跟的单词，错
B.She 在Selma前面，这是不对的。
actually, the way the parallelism is written here, "she" doesn't mean selma.if i say "he wrote the first half, and jim wrote the second half", then the one thing of which you can be absolutely sure is that jim didn't write the first half.
C. .i don't like "was a novelist" either; it seems to imply that selma stopped being a novelist at some point, becoming something else."
(C) in addition (adv) _even we delete it, the meaning of the core of the sentence should not be changed. Hwr, the meaning changes here and we know that the intended meaning: 1st woman and Swedish writer are of the same importance.
(D) Grammatically correct and convey a clear meaning.
(E) that cannot modi ppl. Of course, there are other problems in the choice.
(A) ving，SVO。S shd immediately follow the ving
(B) She+ and SL blablabla->change meaning. Btw, shd avoid the usage like this one in which the pronoun precedes the ante. Besides, that modfied ppl is definitely wrong in GMAT.
and also 不能拿来做排除的理由；虽然很多题目正确答案里都不包括and also;但我看很多OG里解释时，并没有指出and also 是意思重复；
除去毕老师的不定式和从句区别，E选项的最好排除应该是 Ron: the worst thing about this choice, though, is "that". you cannot EVER use "that" to refer to people, even though we do so all the time in spoken english.
不太懂这道题关于不定式和ing区别的解释，难道这个题的意思不是“成为了第一位获奖的女性和瑞士作家”吗，“变成第一位女性和第一位瑞士作家”怎么直接影响“赢得诺贝尔奖”这一事件的发生与否？？
我的理解是，D选项的to win修饰的是前面的动词became，动词不定式作定语；而E选项的that引导定语紧跟writer ，就修饰不到woman了。
获奖的前提是同时是第一位女性和第一位瑞士作家，定语必须同时修饰两者。
我也是这么觉得的，就是他的解释很奇怪，感觉有些不定式和ing区别的是在强行解释
我觉得意思是the first...to do...描述的是一个状态的转变，而不是一种稳定的的状态(a process)，所以应该用不定式而不是从句。
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这里面应该还有A and B和A and also B的辨析吧，前者是两个不同的事物或人，后者是同个事物或人的两种描述
e里面becoming是不是也是不正确的？
在E中a novelist不是elma Lagerlöf 的同位语么，可是同位语不应该是紧挨着的么
修饰原则是要就近修饰。但是同位语不是修饰语啊（定语和状语才是修饰语），自然也不用遵守修饰原则。因此，同位语并不是一定要紧挨着修饰对象的。
所以同位语只是不能修饰带‘s的名词是么，要是修饰带’s的话就要变成of结构
不是啊。同位语可以同位于任何的名词，甚至是句子。
可是老师我刚刚看到在oj2017第26道题那边您的解释是同位语要紧贴着先行词
我觉得这个题是紧挨的啊。who 是修饰小说家，放在一起都是在修饰后面的那个人，没什么问题啊
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选项a in1909修饰了主句SL was a novelist不搭
B and 连词并列了前后两个句子，而前面的句子居然先用she后后面的句子才出现主语SL 排除
读完c似乎没有问题
再读D似乎也没问题
再读E发现将句子的重心变为前半部分，改变了句子的意思，排除
回头再看c发现这之中的 in addition使得前面出现了成为第一个女人的错误意思。
再看，a中and后面的was和b中的as well as均产生了成为第一个女人的错误意思
主要几个判断点：
1. 原文的from XX to XX的逻辑在后面的BE选项中被改成了并列
2. 【the first women and the first swedish】writer的意思在AC中比改了