The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
1.句子结构。BE没有谓语,BE错
2.修饰词。making和which。making是伴随状语,但是这里的插入语应该是修饰主语的,应该用定语。AB错
3.代词指代,AC的their和it都有指代不明的嫌疑,AC相对不优
4.措辞,by using是肯定错的,还不如by their using,E错
tips:make sth. adj结构中如果sth.过长,可以宾语导致:make adj. sth.。
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