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On account of a law passed in 1933, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.
On account of a law passed in 1933, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
题目分析：
本题的划线部分很长，而且意思较难看懂，这里先做一个翻译：
由于一个通过与1993年的法律（该法律内容为：美国公民以金条或金币的方式持有金子是一种犯法的行为），移民们发现，在他们到达美国的时候，他们必须要扔掉自己身上所有的金子。
选项分析：
A选项：本选项最大的错误在于make的真正宾语。语法上看起来是代词it，但实际上这是一个形式主语，指代身后的从句that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins。虽然在语法上正确，但这在逻辑上是错误的。这点考查了“不定式和从句的区别”。用之于本题，由于make的约束力很强，所以身后的宾语只能用不定式的形式（for sb. to do sth是不定式的复合结构）。
B选项：首先，with引导的短语可以理解为一个独立主格的形式，也可以表达和后半句的因果关系，这点没有错误。错误依然出现在make的宾语上，该错误同(A)。
C选项：本选项也可以理解为一个独立主格的形式，没有错误。但是，for a United States citizen holding gold应改为不定式的复合结构for a United States citizen to hold gold。这点考查了不定式和ing的区别。用之于本题，由于make的约束力很强，所以身后的宾语只能用不定式的形式。
D选项：Correct.本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
E选项：being passed in 1933中的being突出了pass事件和found事件（主句）的同时性，但，这两个事件并不是同时发生的，而是法律先被通过，然后移民才会发现自己必须扔掉金子。因此，being必须删掉。
for a United States citizen to hold
a, b, c can all be eliminated because of improper idiomatic usage: the proper idiom is '...a crime for blah blah blah to hold...'
it形式宾语，后面用to do
A 项里making it ... 做状语，如果修饰后面的immigrants found that.. 不可能是immigrant让它变成了punishable, 如果修饰前面动词passed, 但这两个动作并没有关系，因为making it... 是修饰law, 但不是修饰pass....
错选B
because of+noun（一定是名词性质的noun 有的时候v-ing虽然是动名词但是还是表示的动词含义）
①a, b, c can all be eliminated because of improper idiomatic usage: the proper idiom is '...a crime for blah blah blah to hold...'
②choice e changes the meaning of the sentence: taken literally, it says that the immigrants found themselves in this unenviable situation not because of the law itself, but because of the passage of the law.
a law being passed
注意：有强烈的因果关系
AB利用a United States citizen hold主谓不一致可以排除
C 去掉law后面的修饰成分变成A law 与 immigrants两个名词，做同位语意思不对，双主语又是错的结构
E being passed修饰结构不优，且due to 一般跟在名词或者be动词后面 放句首相当于because of不对
the proper idiom is '...a crime for blah blah blah to hold...'
我记得好像有with引导做原因的情况，那b选项中 With a law passed .... 为啥不能做原因状语
AB选项hold主谓不一致。但是有的题解析不是说because of后面不能接复杂的成分吗。。。所以纠结了好久把D排掉了。。
'with' in choice b is also bad: it seems to imply that immigrants arrived with the law in their hands.
choice c implies that the immigrants themselves are 'a law passed in 19xx'
A 中making it a crime中it是形式宾语
C 同位语A law不能修饰主语immigrants
E being passed 正在被通过，错误
* estelle was afraid to move because of a spider sitting on the wall --> correct, because estelle is afraid because of the spider itself, not because of the spider's sitting on the wall.
* we laughed all day because of tony walking into the girls' bathroom --> incorrect, because the verb (walking into the bathroom) is the reason why we were laughing all day.
A making 伴随状语 逻辑主语 incorrect
B 独立主格 it 形式宾语 不能指代 ‘that a United States citizen hold’ -kick off A/B
C 独立主格 可以表示主从句因果关系 emphasize ‘a law passed in 1933’这件事 和 主句内容 逻辑语义上不make sense
D 优于 C 是因为 emphasize 'making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold‘这件事
E being同时性
A making 伴随状语 逻辑主语 incorrect
B that定语从句没有verb ( ...hold V+ed修饰）
C A law （passed in 1933）[that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding...]同位语
语法发上正确 意思上不make sense
D because of + a law ...making 语义上emphasize 法律让带金子的公民行为犯法这件事而不是a law 本身
E being同时性 跟C一样emphasize ‘a law'本身
being突出同时性
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/on-account-of-a-law-passed-in-1993-making-it-a-crime-punish-t3096.html
感谢你，每次都会贴上Ron的解释，省了我很多时间。
虽然估计你也不会看到了hhh，祝一切都好
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看because of后面那么复杂就直接排除D了，，有毒
我也是。。。
Because of 后面并不是一个复杂成分，只是出题的人要迷惑大家，其实是 Because of + 名词 a law + 过去分词修饰 passed ......
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