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When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.
A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.
When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
I think C has a problem with the past perfect "had been " .... This would imply that the inclusion happened before the draft. The intended meaning is that the inclusion happened at the same time.
another problem with C is that is not clear who included the call for female enfranchisement, since the sentence is in passive voice.
我觉得C和E的区别在于语态，C是被动语态，the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton ；a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.被动语态强调的是事件，而不关注发出动作的人是谁。E是主动语态，Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments ；she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.主动语态强调动作的发出者。原文中 included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton,说明要强调一下是ECS这个人在宣言中加入了这个诉求，所以用主动语态表达更好一点儿，所以选E
she included in it 好奇怪。只能说那个Declaration including...吧。
而且我觉得C时态其实没问题啊。在adopt之前已经包括在内了。
把in it提前了
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A-Elizabeth was a call错误
B-THAT修饰convention
C-had been included 时态错误
D-无谓语
B中that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote修饰Convention，错误。
C中when意味着同时发生，主句不能过去完成时，错误。
C的时态不对。前半句是drafted，后半句是had been included 也就是起草的时候，已经就有了call。
对的
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C哪里错了？