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Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.
22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become
22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become
22 and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being
22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being
题目分析：
略。
选项分析：
A选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。由于joined..., was injured..., and was discharged....三者分别描述了三方面的信息，所以三者必须用并列连词and连接，不能用互相修饰的方式连接。只有本选项符合要求。
B选项：while being discharged in 1783是伴随状语，需将其和前句保证并列关系。
C选项：当三者并列时，应只在最后一个并列对象前添加and，即，用A, B, and C。本选项中第一个and多余，应改为逗号。
D选项：动词并列，injured应该用被动，前要补出was才能与joined和was discharged并列。
E选项：本选项用了having been injured…and discharged做join的伴随状语，但在逻辑上三者应保持并列。
错选D，injure应该是被动“受伤害”，动词平行joined the army , was injured three times, and was discharged
joined..., was injured..., and was discharged....三者分别描述了三方面的信息 用and连接 选A
当时没选A主要是觉得过去完成时不正确。 变得太虚弱发生在前，解雇发生在后，ok
A 正确。有before after明显先后顺序的时候，不一定要用过去完成时。had become可以换成became
B while从句不平行。while being discharged in 1783 =while she was being discharged in 1783 ,错误
joined和was injured之间没有连词
C being too ill to serve形容词就近修饰。应该修饰Deborah Sampson这个人，放在DS主语旁边
22 and was injured 中and多余
D done结构=形容词，就近修饰，应修饰DS这个人。injured前加be动词或injured后加宾语
E having been injured three times and discharged 不能做join的伴随状语
正确：I have breakfest,having read the newspaper.在吃早饭前看完报纸
错选D，injure应该是被动“受伤害”，动词平行joined the army , was injured three times, and was discharged
Deborah Sampson 【joined】 the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, 【was injured】 three times, and 【was discharged】 in 1783 because she 【had become】 too ill to serve.
德博拉·桑普森 1782 年 22 岁时【加入】大陆军，3 次【受伤】，1783 年【出院】，因为她【病得】无法服役。
【had become】表明了she become too ill to serve 是发生在was discharged in 1783之前
【没选A主要是觉得过去完成时不正确。 变得太虚弱发生在前，解雇发生在后，ok】
三个动作发生的关系应为平行，特别的，was injured，应为被动“受伤害”，此处应为被动
又错了一次... 过去完成时没问题+be injured
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1.句子结构，句子缺谓语，CE错
2.动词时态，become在discarge前面，所以要用Had,CDE错
3.逻辑推理，WHILE用法错误B错
E having been injured three times and discharged 不能做join的伴随状语
正确：I have breakfest,having read the newspaper.在吃早饭前看完报纸
伴随状语只能和主语同时发生或者发生在主语的时间前
"由于joined..., was injured..., and was discharged....三者分别描述了三方面的信息，所以三者必须用并列连词and连接"
joined..., was injured..., and was discharged....三者分别描述了三方面的信息，所以三者必须用并列连词and连接，不能用互相修饰的方式连接。
was injured
🐎：
injure是个transitive verb，后面一定要跟受伤的对象。可以是injure a person/a body part/one's reputation。如果是某人受伤，则是sb was injured，或sb injured herself，不能说sb injured。不能说sb injured the wall，可以说damage the wall
injure是个transitive verb，后面一定要跟受伤的对象。可以是injure a person/a body part/one's reputation。如果是某人受伤，则是sb was injured，或sb injured herself，不能说sb injured。不能说sb injured the wall，可以说damage the wall
sb is injured，被伤害，而不是sb injured
简单题！
考察：
被动语态；并列；
injure是及物动词，应该是sb is injured，被伤害，而不是sb injured；后面是and was discharged（被解雇）并列
Deborah Sampson是主语，去找谓语，以上，应该加was，两个词都是被动
was injured 去掉D
E injure和discharge不是伴随 join的
B也没有伴随的意思
C and 多余
was injured..
injure，v，he injured his knees; he was injured.
A had become过去完成时，过去完成时要求句子里必须有一个过去的时间或动作，该动作发生在这个时间或动作之前。
He was discharged because he had become too ill. 变得太虚弱发生在前，解雇发生在后，ok
D.
RON: no -- that would be nonsense.
"was injured 3 times" is clearly something that happened after she joined the army; it can't modify the stuff that precedes it.
remember that modifier errors generally aren't grammar errors; they are generally meaning errors.
injured是被动，be injured 被伤害
joined，。。was injured..., and was charged......并列，系动词加入了并列。。