Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.
22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become
22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become
22 and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being
22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。由于joined..., was injured..., and was discharged....三者分别描述了三方面的信息,所以三者必须用并列连词and连接,不能用互相修饰的方式连接。只有本选项符合要求。
B选项:while being discharged in 1783是伴随状语,需将其和前句保证并列关系。
C选项:当三者并列时,应只在最后一个并列对象前添加and,即,用A, B, and C。本选项中第一个and多余,应改为逗号。
D选项:动词并列,injured应该用被动,前要补出was才能与joined和was discharged并列。
E选项:本选项用了having been injured…and discharged做join的伴随状语,但在逻辑上三者应保持并列。
was injured!
受伤要用被动!was injured 时态(我觉得)不算主要考量
三者分别描述了三方面的信息,所以三者必须用并列连词and连接,不能用互相修饰的方式连接。
"was injured 3 times" is clearly something that happened after she joined the army; it can't modify the stuff that precedes it.
remember that modifier errors generally aren't grammar errors; they are generally meaning errors.
joined..., and was injured..., and was discharged...很完美~
因为had become才排除了A选项
请问a里的and的前面的逗号可以去除吗?
D中injured为什么不能是插入语
was discharged 和 was injured three times 不是同一时间发生的,有先后顺序
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不知道injure用被动表示受伤,错选了D T T
joined..., and was injured..., and was discharged...很完美~
剩AD,D中为什么不能是injured做定语插入语?然后joined和was discarded 平行?
我也是这么想的!
RON: no -- that would be nonsense.
"was injured 3 times" is clearly something that happened after she joined the army; it can't modify the stuff that precedes it.
remember that modifier errors generally aren't grammar errors; they are generally meaning errors.
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injured用被动表示受伤。
had become是因为相对1783这个时间点,她已经ill了。
join,injure和discharge并列。
E having done不能连接名词 只能连动词。修饰名词只能用done或者doing
D选项,正是因为被动所以用injured,这里用非谓语修饰这个人。为什么一定要与joined和was discharged并列呢
为什么人可以was injured?那不就是人被受伤了么?
人应该就是被受伤啊,不然是自己伤害自己吗...
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had become是过去的过去,那么发生在was discharged 之前可以理解,但是was discharged和 joined、 was injured并列,这样真的可以吗?
had become的时态怎么理解?
这是because引导的时间状语从句,时间发生在1783年discharged之前,所以用过去完成时。
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只有都含有be动词,并且都表示相同涵义,才可省略
理解句意有完成时的意思