The artist Renoir's last word was "flowers," spoken as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.
as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden
as a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden and was being arranged
as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged
during the arrangement of a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden
while they arranged a bouquet of roses that had just been picked from his garden
题目分析:
本题很短,但是有些选项会很难以排除。
选项分析:
A选项:代词they的指代对象有误。在逻辑上其应该指“一些人”,而在整个语境中并没有they合理的指代对象。
B选项:本选项虽然语法上没有错误,但有逻辑错误。a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden和a bouquet of roses was being arranged in a vase on his bedroom windowsill被并列连词and连接。这两件事均作为The artist Renoir's last word was "flowers,"的时间状语。在逻辑上,这两件事发生的时间都不同,不可能同时做一件事的时间状语。(真正说“花”这个字的时间是“把花安放在花瓶里”这个事件的发生时间,而不是“捡花”的时间)
C选项:Correct.本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。句中的过去分词短语just picked from his garden是作定语修饰roses的。
D选项:名词短语the arrangement of a bouquet of roses需改为从句a bouquet of roses was being arranged,这点考查了名词和从句的区别。用之于本题,在Renoir说出“花”这个字时,显然“将花安放在花瓶”这个动作是正在过程中的,不知道何时完结的,即,在语境中没有时间的终止点。
E选项:代词they的指代对象错误同选项(A)。
as在这里的意思是at the time when
d不优,during the arrangement表面看是正在发生的事这一段时间,但用了名词一般都是已经终止的动作
C和D二选一。Ron的答案:The actual mistake in choice D is the word "arrangement". "Arrangement" doesn't refer to the process of arranging something; it refers to the arrangement that results from that process.
The actual mistake in choice D is the word "arrangement". "Arrangement" doesn't refer to the process of arranging something; it refers to the arrangement that results from that process.
(Similarly, "as I was judging xxxx" makes sense. "During my judgment of xxxxx" doesn't, because a judgment is a conclusion, not the process of arriving at that conclusion.)
同意,mark这个解释
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as在这里的意思是at the time when(不是正常的那种as+名次)
The actual mistake in choice D is the word "arrangement". "Arrangement" doesn't refer to the process of arranging something; it refers to the arrangement that results from that process.
(Similarly, "as I was judging xxxx" makes sense. "During my judgment of xxxxx" doesn't, because a judgment is a conclusion, not the process of arriving at that conclusion.)
这个题有难度
They错误,排除AE
B中and错误
D中arrangement错误,"Arrangement" doesn't refer to the process of arranging something; it refers to the arrangement that results from that process.
D 錯誤 :his garden in a vase. in a vase 是 garden的定語 , 花園不會在花瓶裡. 只會花瓶出現在花園裡
D的解释需要mark
bc的区别就是,b中的as引导状语从句中的事件是两个时间,但是需要引导一个同时发生的事情。
d的错误点在于,during表示的是一个动作正在进行,而arrangement表示的是一个动作发生后的结果。
as+ 句子,当。。。时
这题好难啊!as在这里引导的为啥不是时间状语从句呢? 【艺术家最后一句话是“花”,是因为花已经被摘了,且(过去)正在被插在瓶子里。】不管是从语法上还是语意上,都说的通呀?
as虽然可以引导时间状语从句,但是意思是“随着,当……”,主句的动作一般不都是表示有【“变化的”动词】么?可是主句是be动词啊,be动词不是表状态么?
头秃,太难了。。。。。。。。
being表示一个正在进行的动作,不能删掉
tense
arrangement vs a bouquet of roses was being arranged
as这里做因为,前后因果关系不强,但在Gmat里因果关系一般都很强,所以不是因为,而是表示“当xxx时候”
这样想考试根本时间不够...... 可不可以 直接语意 这个说了最后一个字 说的肯定是作为一个什么什么东西 再 在 小范围进行排除 呜呜呜 我刷GWD 有时候时间真滴不允许我这样慢慢想
若有时间终止点,则选名词短语;若没有没有终止点,则选从句; 正在=没有终点
spoken+... 这个整体是做过去分词修饰那个word的
as...表示当...时
Renoir死前最后一句话(一个词)是“花”,就在别人把从他花园摘的花插在卧室花瓶里的时候。
从句意来看 应该是有种进行的感觉,就是他说的时候,别人在插花。
garden后紧挨着in vase 有歧义,应该arranged in a vase
During the arrangement不如动词arrange
B。as随着,前后时态应一致,后面不能用先发生的过完